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I'm a huge Pens fan and I absolutely love the writing. The description was great. Hope to read more of your stuff.
@BexH
Glad ya enjoyed it!!
Not sure on whether to start posting my new story or not.. I have 10 chapters written but haven't had any motivation to write more cos of the LOCKOUT OF DOOM.
Glad ya enjoyed it!!
Not sure on whether to start posting my new story or not.. I have 10 chapters written but haven't had any motivation to write more cos of the LOCKOUT OF DOOM.
Aw. That was so adorable. And I loved getting Jordan's views on everything. Sorry that it's over, but I really did enjoy reading it!
@BexH
I know what you mean about Jordan - under any other circumstance I would've given him hell for doing that! But it's kinda nice seeing this short tempered side from a guy who's usually all smiles and happiness.
I know what you mean about Jordan - under any other circumstance I would've given him hell for doing that! But it's kinda nice seeing this short tempered side from a guy who's usually all smiles and happiness.
Aw, yay! I'm so glad that Rayne's really starting to warm up to Jordan. And I'm relieved Lucy's okay! In some situations, I think Jordan would have been too controlling, but in this case, you could see he was just looking out for her- even though it might have been a bit drastic.
Oh. My. God.
That was... PERFECTION. I just got all caught up on the last few chapters and they were all equally spectacular. But the ending to chapter 13, I nearly lost it. Jordan was being so sweet and adorable... Ah! Rayne better feel the same eventually!
That was... PERFECTION. I just got all caught up on the last few chapters and they were all equally spectacular. But the ending to chapter 13, I nearly lost it. Jordan was being so sweet and adorable... Ah! Rayne better feel the same eventually!
@BexH
Thanks for the comments =] You'll find out her background eventually lol
I should probably admit that this wasn't originally going to be a Jordan story - he just kind of wormed his way in and completely took over, in the best way.
Thanks for the comments =] You'll find out her background eventually lol
I should probably admit that this wasn't originally going to be a Jordan story - he just kind of wormed his way in and completely took over, in the best way.
Thanks for your comment! I'm seriously flattered that you like my writing =] Hope you like my other stories too!
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