The perfect storm - Comments

@toewskane1988
I'm gonna update tonight or tomorrow night. Crazy busy with homecoming week.

Update more this is awesome!!!!

Love it so far!!

@HockeyGirl17
Yes! Thank you so much!

Great start! Can I suggest to maybe break up the parts where you skip time a bit? Even just with a "..." Or "~~~" Between paragraphs? It would make it easier to follow. :) just a little suggestion!

@megharkin
Thank you! Any ideas?

I like it so far :)