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ah oh my god this is cute!!!! keep writing! your writing is some of the better i've seen on this site... ;)
@MITCHEAE
I was going to fix that right now actually. I hate it when I read stuff when it's formated like that too.
I was going to fix that right now actually. I hate it when I read stuff when it's formated like that too.
Great job ,nice dialogue and plot the only thing I would do would be breaking up your post into easier to read paragraphs or even just playing around with formatting. It may sound lazy from a readers standpoint but if a page looks to busy with words I might pass it up because I don't want to have to use the energy to concentrate on where I am in the story I want to be able to be pulled in and be lost among the words and images...
You do all this with your writing already just suggesting that you try out some formatting for it
You do all this with your writing already just suggesting that you try out some formatting for it
@Savannah73
I've bee trying to! But I don't know where to go with this now...
2/14/14