The Captains - Comments

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@Sidster87
I am so thankful you pointed this out. There's a chapter here that isn't showing up when I click on it, even though I uploaded it. Something happened in that chapter where Chelsea ends up in the hospital. Ill rewrite it and get everything worked out. Once again, thanks so much for saying something.

I'm a little confused. Reading the last chapter Jon was saying when she was in the hospital. I don't remember her going to the hospital. I read all the chapter twice. Am I missing something? I love the story, but I am confused.

just started reading this story. Not sure how I feel about her and sidney not being just friends but not dating and the whole promise ring thing. Kind of if I don't get a better offer feeling to that ya know

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Love this so far :)