The Moonstone Starlet - Comments

Well. There goes my reason for coming to the site. Brava on being done! Hope you find inspiration to write another story.

omg its done.... what am i gonna read now :( So good girl!

What an amazing story. I can't believe it is over.

aweeeeeeeee

That was beautiful!!! Made me teary. Is this the end?

@KWeber8771
Prob tonight or tomorrow

Update please!!!

Getting closer ;) ;)

OMG!! get them back together already!! :) It's killing me!

Ohmygod, Jon is such a dick.

</3 Poor Elia, finally feeling alright and he comes and tears her down.

Ugh!!!!!!!!!! Update Please!

Oh the anticipation... oohlala! Great storytelling!

Jonny boy!!! Gah play nice

NOOOO!!! ELIA NEEDS TO BE THERE WHEN HE HOISTS THE CUP OVER HIS HEAD!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT LINDSAY, IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE ELIA. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Gah...stupid Lindsay (just in this story of course) ... Haha anyways great chapter!!

Soooo good!

Omg......update!!

Ok this is such an obsession. Worth a read... like twice. And then again when I have withdrawal from you being gone too long.

Can't wait for the next one!

Finally!!!! :)