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@crosbee Thank you! What a great compliment! I had SO much fun writing that story, and I obviously got a little carried away with RNH. I can't help it!! Hope you like the end!
I legitimately spent four hours straight reading this. I like it even better than "Come Down To Me", which I didn't think was possible. Still not done the story yet, but so far it's the best fanfic I've ever read.
I think you had us all believing that he was about to propose, haha. But I loved that last little paragraph. 'Every eye was wide as Jordan knelt on the messy floor, in his best suit... and started picking up shards of glass.' I don't know why, but I thought it was so good.
Glad to hear it's not over! And hey, maybe you had a good feeling about the lockout ending!
Glad to hear it's not over! And hey, maybe you had a good feeling about the lockout ending!
I am in love with Ryan right now :) I don't think anyone planned on the lockout being this long but the story is amazing.
Poor Ryan... :S That had to hurt! I've taken a puck to the mask in floor hockey and that can be painful, let alone actually taking the full impact with your face!
And you had me dying from laughter at the joke about Saskatchewan (That's where I live, lol) - probably the best one I've heard yet! Can't wait for more!
And you had me dying from laughter at the joke about Saskatchewan (That's where I live, lol) - probably the best one I've heard yet! Can't wait for more!
Love this story! The Edmonton boys don't get enough love in Fanfiction, and not going to lie, I am absolutely in love with Ryan in this story! He's so adorable, haha! And Ebs too - you've got him portrayed as a perfect mix of boyish and sexy - awesome job!
Don't know why but i could totally picture Ryan yelping and booking it out of the room! Too funny!
Don't know why but i could totally picture Ryan yelping and booking it out of the room! Too funny!
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