L'histoire de Kristopher et Lisha

I love this. and I love that you incorporated some french! So many of these stories have Canadian players and no one attempts to do french! I'm not fluent in french, I took some in college so I got most of it. A+ :) Update soon! :)

Good story ;)
I'm sorry but you got so many fault in french ...
Premier chapitre or chapitre premier not le seulement chapitre
L'histoire de Kristopher et Lisha
Elle n'a pas voulu venir avec moi
Tu es ma meilleure amie

Merci mon petit chou
Dis moi
Je refuse de mettre fin à notre amitié

Je refuse de mettre fin aà

Good story and nice french. Although that seems like an Acadien thing to do, speak Frenglish, but the french you put in was real, not just "Bonjour." It was really good.

If you cant write in french, then just dont.
No offense intended.

I thought this was really cute :) Good job!