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The Maze To Your Heart

Chapter Eleven: Second Period.

One Year Anniversary October 20th, 2011.

"Can you just tell me where you're taking me?" I asked as I had my eyes covered. I was very disoriented. Kristopher insisted on it being a surprised.

"Okay, we're here." He stated as he untied to cover. I opened my eyes to the Consol Energy Center. It had a red carpet on the ice. It was empty, dark, but yet to beautful. In the middle of the ice there were candles, a table, two chairs and food. I was smiling, happily. Kristopher wasn't always one for romance. I understood that about him, but this-- this was amazing.

I looked at him. I kissed him passionately. "Thank you."

I took my seat across the small table from him. I looked at our dinner. He had steak, salad and some weird fancy stuff. It did look good though.

"How were you able to do this?" I asked as I looked around the huge arena. I was still astonished. I mean, wouldn't it cost lots to rent out?

"I was able to talk to the owner's and general manager. I also talked to the people at Benue. They prepared the food. But today after practice I got Pascal and his wife to help me. She said that it was a good idea I do this."

"Thank you again." I said happily.

"It's our anniversary. I think it's right that I push it a little bit on the romantic-meter." He said with a grin.

We ate dinner peacefully. I loved spending time with him. It was so open. We would talk about the stupidest things. A lot of the time it was non-hockey. I think that was the best part. The hockey switch was off for the most part. Our jokes were irrelevant most of the time too.

"Now what, Romeo?" I asked since we were done our dinners.

"We dance." He pulled out his iPhone and looked through it. I wasn't sure whether to believe him or not. We were both really bad dancers.

"Do you really want to dance?" I raised an eyebrow.

"Yes, now stand up." He ordered politely. I decided I better listen to him. He planned this night out for us. It was nice. He was nice. His beautiful suit he had picked out. The dress that Vero prepared for me was gorgeous too.

I stood up and he hit play on his phone. He put it on the table. Kiss Me by Ed Sheeran played sweetly. I just smiled up at him. I had my heads resting around his neck. He had his hands on my waist. This was amazing.

We danced.

I laughed what seemed to be random. He looked at me confused. I rested my head on his shoulders. "Why are you laughing?" He asked.

"Your hair. You finally cut it, even if it's just a little bit." I said easily. His body moved as he laughed too.

"Only a little bit."

"You didn't have to." I told him. The song played at the perfectly.

"I wanted to." He corrected.

The song came to a sad end. "I love you so much." I said as tears were forming in my eyes. I was so in love with the moment. It was romantic.

He let go of me and pulled out a paper from his dress pants pocket. I watch him unfold it neatly and look at me. I was dumbfounded. He looked back down at the paper and he read it:

"Mavel, I remember the day we met. I know I was kind of an asshole. I remember giving you that scar on your jawline. I will constantly apologize for pushing you that day. Fast forward a couple years later. Being at your play off hockey game was one of my favorite memories. It was the day I realized that I liked you. I wanted us to be more than friends. Later we dated each other. I was so happy, but I was so dumb. You left me and I was broken. You went on to Sweden to welcome the birth of our son Kristopher Allen Letang Jr. I will always feel quilt for not being there. But there isn't a day I don't think about him. When you moved to Pitsburgh with me, I felt so content. But the day I knew you were the one was when our reservations weren't in the system and you decided to buy some cheap pizza and beer. 'You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams'. I love you with all my heart. Mavel, will you marry me?"

By the time he was finished I was crying. I was happy. I was just so, everywhere. I didn't know what to think or feel. I just wanted him. He was on one knee and holding a beautiful little box. The ring was beautiful. But Kristopher he was better.

"Yes, I will marry you."

I kissed him, that was the first thing that came to my mind. He was smiling on the kiss. I could feel it. The tears stil came streaming down my cheeks. "Why are you crying?" He asked as he wiped away my tears.

"Because I finally got something right in my life." I simply said and he grinned.

"If you would have said no, I wouldn't know what to do with my life." He said with a laugh. I just smirked at my goofy, Fiancée.

"What you said was beautiful. I really loved it." I told him.

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet -- Plato." He simply said.

"Let's go home,"

Notes

A/N: NOTICE! Chapters are going to be shorter more than likely. Some may be longer. Updates may be less. Or like 2-3 chapters posted at once.

I DO NOT RE-READ THESE. MEANING I DON'T CORRECT THEM.
And check out my forum under hockeyfanfiction.com! That would be greatly appreciated. I am looking for a co-writer. More information in the forum. Ok thanks! -becca

Could you check out my Jordan Eberle/Taylor Hall Story, "Two Images, One Heart." Also my Nazem Kadri/Erik Karlsson short story, "Those Three Words."

Comments

@kyrajenifier

I have re uploaded this and am continuing.

@HockeyGirl17

brm9 brm9
7/22/13
@HockeyGirl17
yeah sure, i don't mind doing those two. i just wanted it to be like a love triangle type thing. & i've started another chapter for this story, and im about to start the new story. :) should be out tonight. both of them. hopefully!
Ojiibikan Ojiibikan
2/25/13
Yeah, that is a lot. You could just start something new with this one! That would be good, I think :) Ummm..... Would Taylor Hall and Jordan Eberle be too cliche of my to say? Haha and for the girls name.... I like Evelyn!
HockeyGirl17 HockeyGirl17
2/22/13
@HockeyGirl17
i don't mind doing both but it will mean like less updating. can you give me two guys from the oilers? preferably around the same age, roughly. & a name for the girl, you won't believe how long it took me to pick mavels name.
Ojiibikan Ojiibikan
2/22/13
I know you probably don't want to do both, but I really liked this story! Hopefully you can get back to it eventually!
I think you should do it on the Oilers. There are so many fics on the Pens, and not many on the Oilers! :)
Can't wait to read it!
HockeyGirl17 HockeyGirl17
2/21/13