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What Dreams Forget

Summary

James Neal wasn't adjusting to Nashville. He had lost his city, his teammates, and his girlfriend. He just wanted to wallow in his own apartment. Clune was having no part of his self pity. He has recruited Nealer to help him convince a family friend to live with Clune while in Nashville. One look at Tori Lynn and Neal was in lust. One listen to her music and he wanted her even more. Clune neglected one small detail Tori Lynn was a Boston Bruins fan. Even worse for James she is a Marchy fan. Can he convince her he is more than a dirty hockey player?

******* Okay Ladies this was a request. Nealer isn't my favorite person. Ahem...we don't knee Marchy! Maybe Tori Lynn and I will both learn to love him***** Tags




Characters

Addison Holmes

Addison Holmes

Calle Jarnkrok

Calle Jarnkrok

Colby

Colby

James Neal

James Neal

Left wing for Nashville Predators

Rich Clune

Rich Clune

Quirky Predators Defensemen

The Nashville Predators

The Nashville Predators

Tori Lynn

Tori Lynn

Family friend of Clune family. Attempting to make her mark in the music industry

Chapters

Comments

I miss this so much:/

crosbyfan87 crosbyfan87
12/7/17

@LuvCreature87
Trust me, I don't have a "fan fiction happily ever after". I've been writing and reading fan fiction (as well as other stories) for 7 years, ranging from musicians, soccer players, and hockey players. My comment wasn't criticism of the writing or the character development. Though I stated my dislike of the main character, it was my opinion of how she came across (which could be considered insight), and it is totally a acceptable in the world of literature review, of which I have taken place in many workshops as well as commented on many stories. I love all of Boston63's stories, and have read all of them.

My comment wasn't written in an attempt to criticize what so ever - as I did not write anything against the author or her writing in any way. I understand that all characters are different and not all main characters are written for the reader to like - especially since there is a large group of different people whom read a story and expect different things from the character they are reading about. I do love how Tori Lynn is respectful of James and is clear to others of her love for him. I just feel that there is a double standard for Tori Lynn when it comes to James (and not just considering the dumb ex, but if he were to ever be close to another woman other than Geno's girl)

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@Twisted;;Symphony

TL is one of the guys they are friends that have never been more than that. The female you are referring to with Neal is his Ex who bashed his heart! Sorry we aren't more forgiving to her ... we have no love for her. It's upseting you think that she is "all over" her friends. The point of his story was a creative outlet for one of my best friends and her stories are based off real lives and realistic situations. I'm sorry we don't fit into your stereotype fanfiction happily ever after. If your comments arent constructive please don't post. You offered no insight just criticism.

LuvCreature87 LuvCreature87
8/24/17

I really don't like how Tori Lynn is always all over a ton of guys 24/7, but James is an ass when he pays attention to even 1 girl. It's ridiculous and I hate the double standard. I loved how Tori Lynn came across in the Gene story, but reading this one... I don't know.

However, that being said, I really do wanna see what happens next - especially with Sam! I kind of want Tori Lynn to do some grovelling - though I don't wanna see James hurt