Wake Me Up - Comments

she died ... no

Im not going to lie I was hapeing for a twist in the story and Pat would be the one to save her lol but great story anyways put more soon

aww.. So happy her and her team whipped it out in the championship and that someone was there to stop the a holes at the bar

really great. Loved that she checked Pat. I honestly would love a story where they didn't necessarily play him off as an ass once he gets in a relationship. Everyone makes bad decisions where he is in his life his is just more publicized. Of course I have never met him or would actually know him more than face value so he always could be an A hole.. who knows...

Anyway great story keep it up

Please post soon :) I'm having withdrawal symptoms from not reading your stuff.

Awesome story!!!!!!!!

cute

@Stacey93w
Omg wtf!? Ur right they r the same!!!! I typed something for that chapter!!! Hmmm....I'm goin to try to go fix this problem now lol. Thank you!!

I'm 99.9% sure chapter 8 & 9 are the same. OH MY GOSH this is getting good! I love Patrick don't break his heart :( Please write more soon :)

Love it : ) Can't wait for PK to see her play

chapter 8.. needs to stand up for herself...

I think everyone at this point is going to be on team Jackie. I'm on that team to.

Team Jackie!!!!!! Hannah seems like a bitch

Team Jackie without a question. Hannah's a bimbo and I personally don't like girls like that. Really excited to read more!

haha.. yeah jackie just seems so much better

AWESOME!!!!!!!

Great so far.... really love the inside look on jackies life