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AAOOOSC! The Movie! - Comments
@A Shruinger
Will do ;) I have to go out for a little bit, but when I get back I will gladly finish it off and then send you my review! :)
@EvelynaKitty
Aw, thank you so much! So you decided to read this story! Yay!!! :D Yea, I miss Teemu as well (even though I'm a Sharks fan). That's cool that you like it! Continue reading and critiquing! :DDD
"Patrick is kneeling on his seat, looking down at Toews, who is seating on the seat behind him.
"Shut your maple syrup mouth, you moose lovin' dude!" Patrick snaps.
"Don't even show your Statue of Liberty face, you red, white, and blue, star and stripe patriot!" Toews shoots back.
"Wow, they're already enemies even though they're not at Sochi, yet!" Jonathan exclaims.
Toews begins to cry. "Oh man, oh man, I can't do this! I can't be enemies with you, Patrick!"
Patrick also begins to cry. "Me, too, dude! Same here, man!" Toews stands up and Patrick hugs him.
"Oh. They were just practicing. I was about to say..."
The above made me crack up. I also laughed at the Getzlaf-Perry scene with Teemu! I miss Teemu now.... :(
I meant to stick this up before, but I totally forgot, so I'm doing it now. I like so far! :) I'll message you with more critiques. But I'm digging it so far!
"Shut your maple syrup mouth, you moose lovin' dude!" Patrick snaps.
"Don't even show your Statue of Liberty face, you red, white, and blue, star and stripe patriot!" Toews shoots back.
"Wow, they're already enemies even though they're not at Sochi, yet!" Jonathan exclaims.
Toews begins to cry. "Oh man, oh man, I can't do this! I can't be enemies with you, Patrick!"
Patrick also begins to cry. "Me, too, dude! Same here, man!" Toews stands up and Patrick hugs him.
"Oh. They were just practicing. I was about to say..."
The above made me crack up. I also laughed at the Getzlaf-Perry scene with Teemu! I miss Teemu now.... :(
I meant to stick this up before, but I totally forgot, so I'm doing it now. I like so far! :) I'll message you with more critiques. But I'm digging it so far!
@Detroitredwingsfan22
Awwwww! Thank you! :D I made one for this story, but I'm going to put it up after I finish the story. I also put an NHL one on my profile, if you want to check that out! Thanks again! :)
@lazyisscoreee
Oh yes, Caspar Lee! :)))
12/26/14