Moving up to the NHL - Comments, page 2

Should I put mature content in the next chapter?

I like that as a title. Any other suggestions?

@Penguins lover 3 How about I'm Dating a Penguin. As a Title?

@Penguins lover 3 NOOOOOOO, WHAT?, WHY?, BAD CLIFF-HANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yep, this story is getting a sequal. I think I will do one more chapter for this story, then I will start the seqal next week.

@Penguins lover 3
Yaay sequels

@Penguins lover 3
Ok great

I will have this chapter up tonight. I am almost done with it.

its coming good. I think you will like it. I have a great idea how to end this story. I may do a sequal too.

How's it coming?

@Penguins lover 3

@Penguins lover 3
oh Wow Now that Sucks

Well, I have to rewrite it because for whatever reason, my computer had erased everything I wrote.

@Penguins lover 3 How's it coming along?

@Penguins lover 3
Ok great

Actually Itried looking at the post on the Olli Maatta story but it wouldnt let me view it for some weird reason. The next chapter for this stoyr should be up sometime this week.

@Penguins lover 3

So When Will The next Chapter Be up?

@Penguins lover 3
Ok great I wasn't sure if you seen the post on the Olli Maatta story

Thanks! I love these ideas and her brother is older. I realized I never focused much on him. He is protective older brother. He is just a year older than her.

there's some help for you

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@Penguins lover 3
when Tristan comes over to the house for dinner he sits on the couch with her dad and her little brother and her dad is just enjoying this because he doesn't have to do anything he just sits back and enjoys it because his son he's actually doing what he has been trying to do this whole time he's protecting Natalitle and of course Tristan is uncomfortable with this then her brother says about These rules that are important to him and his dad that Tristan should follow 1. get a job number to keep in mind that I don't like you three I'm everywhere for you hurt her you die 5 be home before midnight 6 get a good lawyer 7 if you lie to me find a place to hide number 8 she's my best friend not your toy number 9 what she wants she gets number 10 I don't mind going to prison Tristan is but now terrified but he knows that he won't hurt Natalie he's he's in love with her I would never dream of hurting her Natalie's mom hears all of this and tells Tristan that she needs some help that if he would come into the kitchen and help out would be great after he walks in Natalie goes to talk to her dad about something and Tristan was talking to Natalie's mom and she apologizes for what her brother was saying to Tristan but Tristan says no he gets it he just try to do what he thinks is best for Natalie he's just trying to protect his sister he doesn't want to see her get her just as much as her dad doesn't want to see her get hurt it's normal