Dangeruss & Tazer - Comments

@EvelynaKitty
Alright! I shall wait then ;)

@A Shruinger
Glad to know you enjoy the cliffhanger and now you have to wait about three weeks for the sequel to begin! HaHa! :D

AHHHH! What a cliffhanger!!! 8OOO Bravo! Bravo! *applause, applause* I enjoyed the story a lot!! :D Great job on it!!! :DDD

Message to Readers, I am slowly going back over this and applying changes, if it pops up as an update, I apologize. I am just editing and making small corrections for it to read well. Thanks, Stephi AKA: Evelynakitty :)

I know!!!! Everybody loves Kazer!! (And maybe Shawzy and Sharpie...) :) But seriously, how can anyone dislike any of the Blackhawks???? And jealousy doesn't count!! ;)

YESSS!!! 8DDD I really wanna see 'em!!! THEY'RE SO AWESOME!!! :D

@A Shruinger
Watching hockey highlights of Nichy and Kinny and chirping isn't helping out the eagerness in my heart any....but yes! See Kazer play and Shawzy and Sharpie!!!! :)

@EvelynaKitty
YES!!! And watch the Blackhawks play!!! :DDD That'd be AWESOME!!! 8D

@A Shruinger
Yay, I'm glad that it was okay!!!! One day we can both get to Chicago, right? :D

That car chase was AWESOME!! Great job!!! :D I've never been to Chicago before, so don't worry! :) I want to go really badly as well! :) I like the story so far!!! :DDD

@EvelynaKitty
You fixed 'em well! Great job! *applause, applause*

Thanks, I'll look at those and Aspiring is almost done.....this is gonna be a real long chapter....geez.

Wow, what a chapter! And when you ask, you shall receive, so here is my critique for this chapter (only putting in what to fix):
-What do you mean by this: The trees were scattered about and it wasn’t a thick forest, as he could see through the wood to the other side.
-I think that the stabbing of poor Chop Chop was a bit too fast...
-What happened to your spacing during the middle of the chapter? It's looking like mine now! XD
Other than that, the pacing if great! And like always, no grammar errors! ;)

@A Shruinger
I'm finalizing the last of it!! :)

@EvelynaKitty
Oooo...okay!! :)) I'm ready! ;)

@A Shruinger
It's two actually. I'm doing the second part of it now, which will explain just what Kruger did, how and why! :) Get ready to feel for him....

@EvelynaKitty
Yea, because I thought that it was gonna be more than one chapter... It looks like it's gonna cover only one chapter, so it's good ;)

@A Shruinger
Yay!!! So it works???? :)

Hahaha!!! I love the entrance of Sharp and Mike! XDDDDD Awesome job on that!

Yay! Jonathan and Russell became friends! Can't wait to see what they do next!!! :DDDD