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Yea, just made it short and sweet! :) Hmmm...I never thought about Jonny going after Nathan... Yea, I feel for Jonny...big time.. :(
Hahahahaha I remember that! I laughed!!!! :) I thought he deserved it, cause earlier he dove! It's just water Sid, chill out. Literally.
It was a sweet little chapter. At first when I saw that Jonathan was looking in, I thought for a moment he was gonna snap and attack Nathan, but then he didn't. Poor Quicky. :(
Yay updates!!!! :DDDD (And school....)
@EvelynaKitty
That'll be all explained...tomorrow. Sorry that you gotta wait :( I know, it's so sad!!! 8,(
@EvelynaKitty
HAHAHA, YES!!! It was unexpected!!! ;) Good, that was what I was aiming for! Thank you, thank you. *bows many times* :))))
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! The Chicago spy!!!! Kaner live darn you! I did not see that coming! *applauds*
Hahaahahaaaa!!! XD I didn't think about it that way!!! I reason why I think Bruins got eliminated was because of Tuukka (sorry there, Tuuks). But yea, you can picture it that way, but Brad doesn't have an evil twin in this story! But that DOES give me an idea for the next AAOOOSC! story ;) Thanks! :D
"Tuukka going to...end playoffs."
"End playoffs? You mean get eliminated from the playoffs?" Brad's eyes grow wide.
.....OH, SO THAT'S WHY BOSTON DIDN'T CONTINUE.....And maybe this is why Brad didn't score....it wasn't Brad! It was his evil twin out to ruin him and his career! :)
"End playoffs? You mean get eliminated from the playoffs?" Brad's eyes grow wide.
.....OH, SO THAT'S WHY BOSTON DIDN'T CONTINUE.....And maybe this is why Brad didn't score....it wasn't Brad! It was his evil twin out to ruin him and his career! :)
@EvelynaKitty
No! I cannot let Sid die! 8O Haha, thanks! It was suppose to be suspenseful! ;) You are welcome! I had to call you out! :))) Don't worry, more'll be coming up soon! :D
YAY!!!! Eeeeeeeee!!!!! Darn I though he was gonna die! *snaps in disappointment* Good suspense though! Love it!!! :) I didn't mind it being Sidney, because, honestly, I kept imagining it being Kaner though.....haha. ;)
Yes, you have been reading too much of my stuff! lol Thanks for the callout!!! XD I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@EvelynaKitty
Oh thank you for the corrections! I fixed them!! Yay, I'm glad you like Sid with Nathan!!! :D
A few things that I found....
"Twenty-nine," Tommy corrects. "Jimmy's not here, since he's the one with all the players."
Players or powers? I think you mean to say powers.
"That's the reason why you don't so good."
Don’t look so good, "look" was forgotten.
The two Finnish look to their side, seeing Jonathan giving a dark look at Kari.
The two Fins or Finnish players…
Other than that! Yay an update! I like Kinny and Sid's part! :)
Noooo, I'm sorry :( But I AM planning for him to be in the next AAOOOSC! story ;) Don't worry, you just gotta wait till tomorrow for the next chapter! ;) Yea, it's something Brad would do if he has claws :) Yay! You like El Choowe!!! :))))) Oh, I never thought about it that way...I can see that! :)
JONATHAN TOEWS!!!! That's the new character right???? Don't pin against Marchy....don't pin him against Marchy!! AHHHH!!! NEXT CHAPTER DARN YOU!!!!! :D I love Brad's threats to everyone with his claws! Awwww El Choowe is soooooo cute!!!! The only horse I truly love! Haha. He reminds my of little Pegasus from Hercules (Disney version of course)!! :)
@A Shruinger
I figured that they would...I'm getting really excited to know where this is going and what's gonna happen to our favorite little spy, Kanerboo?! ;)
@EvelynaKitty
Well...let's just say that Quick's just gonna get worse... 8| I don't want to say anything else or else I might spoil the story!!! DUN DUN DUUUUUN!!! 8OOOO (Poor Nemo :( ) Don't worry, the explanation of Quick's actions will be showed towards the end of the story...
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