Peekaboo - Comments

@ukiss
Okay, what do you consider to be Disney then, eh? And this is a fanfic and fanfics are stories that can be written about anything, even ideas and themes that aren't the author's, so we can't be sued. Thanks for commenting, but why don't you keep your rude comments to yourself because in here, we are friends and we don't spread hate. So answer the question of mine or leave.

@ukiss
Hi thank you for taking to here and expressing your opinion and also being incredibly mean. I hope you feel good about yourself.

I hope Disney sues you for embarassing their brand

omgggg miley & pretty boy <333333

@A Shruinger
Heehee. Do you have the pictures for Nemo for the college that you want me to make?

@EvelynaKitty Alright, awesome! :D Hahahaaha, that's right! XDDD OMG, I'm laughing inside right now! :)))

The title is fine! Haha....can't have cold pot pie now....that's no fun!! ;)

@A Shruinger
I see that. Sorry about the Sharks...GO BRUINS!!!! :D And HAWKS and STARS...Dang the Stars look super scary this year....they are going to be the dark horse and possibly the Cup winners! GO NICHY!!!! :DDDDDD But the Avs are losing...to the Panthers! Ugh! :(

@EvelynaKitty
You are welcome! I replyed to your note below the chapter in the doc! :)

@A Shruinger
I put in my own comments, responding to yours. Thanks for the heads up and the comments and catching some things. :) I'm going to fix a few parts still. :) But thanks!

@EvelynaKitty
I read through what you wrote and I left comments in it! Ask me any questions about what I put in the comments! :)

@EvelynaKitty
Alright, will do! ;)

@A Shruinger
Hey, I did the next two chapters of Peekaboo in the document in google. Check it out and then I'll post them both up on Friday. Okay?? :D

@EvelynaKitty
Only in this story Nemo is evil, NOT in real life :) That's good that you fixed it! :) You are welcome! :))

@A Shruinger
okay. It just made sense to me. But only Nemo is PURE evil...and Raffi Torres...scary dude. ;) And thanks I will fix that now! :D

Yea, it's in the second to last chapter--Something Bruin in Avondale. It's towards the end of the chapter. Tbh, I can see how Hertl looks like a beaver! XD But you are more than welcome to go ahead and use other Sharks players as Nemo's followers! ;)

@A Shruinger
I don't remember that, but I can go back and change that...that may be a typo on my part. Sorry. Yeah, they aren't supposed to know it's Sid. Yet.
Heehee Hertl's a beaver!!!! A GIANT beaver!!!! I was thinking about how I could have the beaver as a minion for Nemo and I was like, well he's a Shark, so it should make sense that all of his minions are Sharks. So therefore the name that popped into my head was Hertl. I thought it would be HILARIOUS!! :D

@EvelynaKitty
Oh, but you put someone saying, "How would that go over, huh? You really want to be known as “Reilly Smith the guy who accidentally ate Sidney Crosby?" They're not suppose to know about Sid yet.
And I read the other chapter. OHMYGOODNESS WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO HERTL??? A giant beaver? XDDD I don't know wether I approve of that or not, but it's okay--I just can't picture Hertl like that! XDDD

@A Shruinger
No. Reilly was just chasing a Penguin and he wanted to eat it. No one knows about the Penguin being Sid yet. Not until he shows up again later on. Does this make sense now? :D

OMG, I LOVE Reilly's character!!! It's like awesome!!! Great job on that! But one thing: do they know that the penguin is Sid, though? It seems like they all of a sudden knew who he was...