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@LuvCreature87
Trust me, I don't have a "fan fiction happily ever after". I've been writing and reading fan fiction (as well as other stories) for 7 years, ranging from musicians, soccer players, and hockey players. My comment wasn't criticism of the writing or the character development. Though I stated my dislike of the main character, it was my opinion of how she came across (which could be considered insight), and it is totally a acceptable in the world of literature review, of which I have taken place in many workshops as well as commented on many stories. I love all of Boston63's stories, and have read all of them.
My comment wasn't written in an attempt to criticize what so ever - as I did not write anything against the author or her writing in any way. I understand that all characters are different and not all main characters are written for the reader to like - especially since there is a large group of different people whom read a story and expect different things from the character they are reading about. I do love how Tori Lynn is respectful of James and is clear to others of her love for him. I just feel that there is a double standard for Tori Lynn when it comes to James (and not just considering the dumb ex, but if he were to ever be close to another woman other than Geno's girl)
@Twisted;;Symphony
TL is one of the guys they are friends that have never been more than that. The female you are referring to with Neal is his Ex who bashed his heart! Sorry we aren't more forgiving to her ... we have no love for her. It's upseting you think that she is "all over" her friends. The point of his story was a creative outlet for one of my best friends and her stories are based off real lives and realistic situations. I'm sorry we don't fit into your stereotype fanfiction happily ever after. If your comments arent constructive please don't post. You offered no insight just criticism.
I really don't like how Tori Lynn is always all over a ton of guys 24/7, but James is an ass when he pays attention to even 1 girl. It's ridiculous and I hate the double standard. I loved how Tori Lynn came across in the Gene story, but reading this one... I don't know.
However, that being said, I really do wanna see what happens next - especially with Sam! I kind of want Tori Lynn to do some grovelling - though I don't wanna see James hurt
@Boston63
My boys just recently played boston and i dont remember seeing much of him. But on the other hand the other miller got away with a potentially dangerous hit.
Adorkable. I rather like that word.
@defaultmemory
They are so different. Kevan is much more laid back and has the Cali vibe but he is a beast on the ice. Especially with the new coach.
Neal is Neal. He is completely adorkable in so many ways. For some reason he seems to be my writing default. I never run out of Neal
Sweet Baby Jesus.... Nearly 1,000 views overnight. I'm not sure if I should be proud of terrified. I knew y'all liked my Belles but not to this extent. I am so sorry I left y'all hangin'. I will do my best to update more frequently. @LuvCreature87 puts up with my whims, my starts, and my stops. Without her my little world would collapse.
@defaultmemory Since you asked so nicely I'll finish up Tori Lynn's birthday before finishing my secretish project... Thanks for being a loyal reader.
To everyone thank you from the tip of my ponytail to the soles of my boots. I love y'all!
@LuvCreature87
Please excuse me while I do a happy dance, I actually just reread kk and Brad about a week ago, I think between the 3 bells and TL Caro is the only one I havnt reread recently.
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12/7/17