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Tell Me What You Want

Mystery Man

“Man you got to get out of here” Luke screams to Brody as he gets off the elevator.

“I’m here to talk to Ashley” Brody says to me looking apologetically, but looks back at Luke like he is ready to fight.

“I don’t want to talk to you so stay away from me and my friends. Stay out of my life”. I scream to Brody coldly and try to walk past him but he grabs my wrist and turns me around to face him.

Luke tries to escort Paige and Katie back into the small apartment but they didn’t budge. They wanted to make sure I was okay and be there if my sensitive side was going to show. Once Brody turned me around our faces were only centimeters apart. I didn’t know what had just happened but what I did know is if I didn’t move he was going to try and kiss me. After standing there for about 3 seconds I was going to try and make a run for it. I didn’t act quick enough and the next thing I know his lips were pressed to mine.

“What the fuck do you think you are doing?!” I scream at brody peeling our bodies apart.

Luke didn’t waste a minute to pounce onto brody and start punching him. That is the exact moment I knew he was there to protect me. Katie pulls me into a hug and Paige tries to pull her brother off and finally succeeds after a couple good punches.

“Don’t ever and I mean EVER do that to my cousin again. There was a reason why she dumped your sorry ass a long time ago.” Luke belts out to brody as Paige pushes him into my apartment.

“Brody, I think you need to leave” I say to brody and try not to cry when I see what Luke had done to his nose and lip.

“I just wanted to say I was sorry for what happened senior year of high school. What I did was stupid and childish. I never meant to hurt you.” Brody says to me apologetically.

I didn’t know what to say. A part of me wanted to give him a hug and help him clean up a little bit, but another side of me knew not to trust him.

“I’m going to leave you two alone and see if Lukes okay” Katies words start to slur as she sprinted inside the apartment.

“So what do you say do you forgive me?” Brody said looking at me but I avoided his gaze.

I was speechless. After what Luke had just done for me I didn’t know if I could forgive him. I didn’t know if I really wanted to.

“I’m going to think about it, you really hurt me in high school and I don’t know if I’ll be able to trust you again.” I said still avoiding his gaze

“I want to fix that Ashley. I want to be with you. I want you to come with me in whatever team I make in the NHL. I love you Ashley. I always did and always will.” Brody said giving me a kiss on the cheek and walked toward the elevators. I was in shock with what he had just said I didn’t even notice Katie, Paige and Luke standing behind me.

“Ready to go?” Katie says pulling me out of my thoughts.

“Yeah just let me go grab my keys” I say softly going back into my apartment and head towed the elevator.


“Ashley omg I haven’t seen you in fucking forever! Have you been avoiding me bitch?” Lauren screams as she wraps her arms around me.

“Ummmm have you checked your messages? Bitch you shouldn’t be talking” I say sarcastically as I wrap my arms around her.

Katie and Paige were just walking around Millennium Park and taking pictures with the bean. They were acting like such tourists.

“Hey Ashley” Roy says giving me an awkward side hug. Luke was standing right there ready to pounce in case Roy tried to do anything like brody.

Like Brody and I, Roy and I had a, shall we say awkward high school experience. I knew he always liked all of my friends by the way he would act around them. Every time I would have Lauren over he would want to hang out with us, do whatever we wanted to do, that’s when I knew I would catch them doing stuff.

Spring break came around the end of March and we decided we all wanted to do something with friends. Luke and I both decided we wanted to go on a cruise, we invited a couple of close friends and those included Roy and Lauren. The second night on the ship they snuck out of the teen party and made their way up to the sky deck and spend some ‘alone time’. When I finally realize they left, I adventured up to the sky deck to find them in a serious make out session, and getting a little touchy.

“Hey Roy” I say trying to avoid his gaze by starring at the ground.

“Still haven’t gotten over high school have you?” Roy asks sarcastically.

“Nope” I say walking away because I just didn’t have the energy to talk about it.

After 5 minutes of small talk I decided to go join Katie and Paige at the bean and take some pictures. I knew it was time to leave when Lauren and Roy came to join us and take some pictures, but started making out in the middle of a nice picture.


When we got back to my apartment we tried to scrounge for food. I finally gave in, I had had enough of not having any food except for bread and peanut butter. I made a list of groceries I needed and went to go grab something out of my room. When I came back out I checked my list. “Damn Luke” I mumbled under my breath. When I looked over to the couch I see Luke giggling and trying to avoid my gaze. Katie and Paige didn’t understand until they came over and checked the list when they started to giggle to. As I’m leaving my apartment Luke yells “Don’t forget anything on the fucking list!” “Fuck you!” I screamed as I walked out and got some strange looks from my neighbors.


When I got to target I grabbed a cart quick and darted for the grocery part. I went through my list and got everything I needed and headed toward the toy section, knowing my little cousins were going to come stay with me for a night and I wanted to be preparered. As I was leaving the section I got a text
message from my cousin Adam.

ADAM: Guess who’s the best cousin ever?

ME: Let me guess... Peter?

ADAM: Fuck you

ME: Wow harsh

ADAM: anyway it’s me... I just scored you one of the best jobs ever if you are up for it

ME: Hell Yeah! What is it?

ADAM: All you have to do is show up to games and practices and cheer on the team

ME: Wonderful what is the team name and when do I start?

ADAM: Tomorrow and Chicago Blackhawks... I gotta go... Love You Ashley!

ME: Alright Love you too! Text me with more det- Ahhhh the Chicago Fucking Blackhawks!! HELL YEAH!!! Anywho text me with the details.

Right as I sent the last text, someone who is also in a rush runs into me. The momentum of the two carts made me fall backwards. I stood up bright red and tried to avoid the mans gaze.

“I’m so sorry I wasn’t paying attention at all” the man says trying to help me pick up some of the toys that fell out of the cart.

“It’s all good, neither was I” I said shyly still avoiding his gaze.

“From the look on your face you looked pretty excited about something” he says trying to make eye contact.

“Yeah I just got a job and it’s for my favorite NHL team and wow I just told someone I don’t even know what I’m doing with my life before I told my cousin.” I say excitedly.

“Who’s your cousin? Does he play hockey?”

“Um yeah actually he does. He’s in the draft tomorrow and is being scouted by a couple teams.”

“What’s his name?”

“Luke Thomas”

“Oh yeah I know about him he’s pretty good.” As the familiar looking man said that I looked up and caught his eyes. Wow they were gorgeous.

“I’m Patrick Kane by the way. Looks like we will be seeing each other a lot more this upcoming season huh?” he says coolly adjusting his hat to make sure it’s perfect.

“I guess we will be” I say with a blush creeping onto my cheeks. He is attractive.


Thanks again to @hellocaptainserious for helping me edit this and make it better! She is probably going to read over most of my chapters before I post them to help them be better. She also helped me come up with the title, I couldn't think of a good one. Sorry it took so long to update, it has been a very hectic week for me!


please update!

Psquared91 Psquared91
WOW !!!
Sidster87 Sidster87
This is a really good story!!!!
Paige Kane Paige Kane