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Hockey Genes

Mistakes


I woke up from the smell of pancakes cooking upstairs. I looked next to me and Brayden wasn’t there so I’m assuming it’s him. I slipped on a pair of comfy shorts and put my slippers on and headed upstairs in the kitchen.


Tori: “wow it sure smells good in here”

Suddenly, Luke turned around from the stove and faced me. He was wearing a robe and no shirt under it.

Luke: “I see you wake up to the smell of pancakes huh?”

Tori: “hahaha yeah. Or food in general.”

Luke: “are you sure we’re not related?”

Tori: “hahahaha I’m pretty sure. I guess we’re just alike.”

Luke: “Where’s Brayden? Is he still sleeping?”

Tori: “He wasn’t in bed when I woke up, I thought he was up here.”

Luke: “Oh no… it’s just me”


Luke started walking over to me and trapped me in the corner of the kitchen. He looked down at me, and then in my eyes.

Luke: “You know me and Jeska just ended things and I uh….”

Suddenly, we heard the front door open and Luke backed away from me and continued working on his pancakes. Brayden walked in the kitchen with 3 cups of starbucks in his hands.

Brayden: “I got Starbucks!!!”

Tori: “Aw thanks Bray”

Luke: “Yeah, thanks bray”


Luke repeated me, kind of in a pissed off tone because he interrupted us. I walked over to Brayden, and he handed me my coffee, then he set the other one on the counter for Luke.

Brayden: “Aw man you’re making pancakes!!!”

Luke: “Of course I would, what else is there to make in this house with all this maple syrup.”

Brayden: “You can never have enough syrup. Do we have everything for the party?”

Luke: “By everything you mean the drinks? I picked them up last night before going to bed. We’re stocked.”

Brayden: “Alright nice. I’ll go tell the boys after we eat.”


And Brayden did just what he said. After we ate our delicious breakfast, thanks to Luke, we all got ready for the party. But there’s one thing. What just happened between me and Luke? Was he trying to make a move on me? But I do know one thing. I love Brayden and I’m not that stupid to mess it up, especially cheat on him. I just know some shit is going to go down tonight at this party because we’re all going to be completely drunk.

I went downstairs to me and Brayden’s room and took a shower. When I came out, I found a shopping bag laying on the bed. Inside there was a black with a pair of black high heel sandals. There was also a note that said ‘wear this ;) ~Brayden’ Well, that didn’t take long. Thank god I don’t have to spend hours on picking out an outfit. But I can’t believe Brayden did that, it was brand new and damn does he have the same shoe taste as me.

I put a robe on and put my hair in a towel and started on my makeup. After doing a smokey eye I dried my hair and curled it. Then there was a knock on the door, I opened it up and it was Brayden.


Brayden: “wow, you’re not even dressed yet and you already look amazing”

Tori: “It’s probably the makeup.”

Brayden: “with or without it you’re still the most beautiful girl I’ve ever laid eyes on”

Tori: “Awwwww whats with all this sweet talk? Trynna get it tonight?”

Brayden: “I haven’t been complementing my girl enough, she deserves it. Other than that yeah maybe a slice... a slice of that cake” *slaps my butt*

Tori: “Hahahaha you just can’t get enough can you?”


Brayden walks up to me and moves the hair out of my face so he can look in my eyes. He grabs my hand and says,

Brayden: “All I know is I want you now, and forever”

Tori: “I love you Bray”


I say as I wrap my arms around his neck and give him a kiss. Brayden kisses me back and says,

Brayden: “I love you too Tor”


I let go from Brayden and took off my robe and started getting dressed. I looked over at Bray and noticed he was struggling on picking out something to wear. I walked over to him and he gave me puppy dog eyes, begging for my help. I gave him a reassuring smile and picked out black dress pants and a dark grey button down dress shirt.


Brayden: “Thanks tor”



Instead of saying you’re welcome, I slap him on the butt because, why not, have you seen dat ass? I walked over and sat on the bed, watching Brayden get dressed. When he was done, I put on my heels and we walked up stairs to the living room and kitchen.


Luke: “They should be here any minute now”

Before I could get something to drink, I heard the doorbell ring. I walked over and answered the door and greeted Claude with his date. I didn’t even close the door yet and Scotty, Zac, and Sean arrived.

Zac: “Lookin nice there Tori”

Scotty: “You did good eh schenner”

Sean: “You look beautiful Tori”

Tori: “thanks guys”

I said with a smile. They walked over to Brayden and Luke welcomed them to the party. I followed them and got myself a drink.


A couple minutes later, Wayne showed up with some girls, followed by Matt Read and Jake Voracek. Claude and Scott set up a beer pong table while Zac helped Brayden get the drinks out. Zac could practically make any drink you want. He’s like our personal bartender. As the party got going, Wayne poured some shots and we all took them.


Luke: “Remember Brayden we have to get this girl drunk before any of us”

Brayden: “won’t take long with that tiny body of hers”

Zac: “Here, this should get her going.”


Zac gave me a drink and I chugged it down. I took a couple more shots and made my way over to the beer pong table to check that out. It was me and Sean versus, Brayden and Claude, Scott was the ref. I made the first 4 without missing and I drank some more.

Claude: “damn schenner looks like your girl is better at you at this game”

Sean: “Hell everyone is better than Brayden, he’s a bender”

Brayden: “Shut up ya goon, you have a baby face”

Sean: “Well this baby face and your girl is about to kick your ass”

Tori: “Alright guys break it up, hey scotty aren’t you supposed to be settling this down?!”


I look across the room and saw Scotty taking some shots with zac and some girls. Of course. We all laughed and continued our game. It wasn’t long until me and Sean won, and were completely wasted. Sean, who is much bigger than me and therefore not as drunk as I am, helped me over to the couch and got me a bottle of water. It was getting later and later and people started leaving before getting completely drunk so they could drive home. Sean stayed by my side on the couch and looked after me.


Sean: “Hey Luke have you seen Brayden?”

Luke: “I think he’s passed out somewhere, probably on the kitchen floor.”

Sean: “can you look after Tori, I have to get going, it’s getting late”

Tori: “Nooo Sean it’s like 9:00 you gotta stay no sean don’t go”

Luke: “Wow she’s drunk hahaha yeah I’ll take care of her”

Tori: “noooo where is Sean going?” Why is he leaving???”

Luke: “He has to go home. It’s ok.”

Tori: “No it’s not okkk everyone is leaving me. They hate me.”

Luke: “They don’t hate you Tori, they just have to go home that’s all. It’s getting late.”

Tori: "It’s not even late it’s like 1 in the afternoon.”

Luke: "It’s 2 in the morning, it’s late.”

Tori: “Where is everyoneee, where’s Bray”

Luke: “They left. Brayden is sleeping.”

Tori: “I wanna sleep. Sleep with me”

Luke: “You should go to bed, I’ll take you downstairs”


Luke carried me downstairs into the guest bedroom and laid me on the bed

Tori: “I want you. I want a slice of that assss”

Luke: “You’re drunk Tori”

Tori: “Noo I’m not im totally fine and I want you why won’t you listen to me. I thought you wanted a piece of this”

Luke: “Well I do but…”

Tori: “But what Luke”

Luke: “You’re drunk.”

Tori: “It’s okkkk”

Luke: “I guess we can kiss a little..”

Tori: “Yeah wait no no we can’t-”



Before saying anything else, Luke straddled on top of me and cupped my face in his hands and kissed me. I got lost in my words as he kissed me, I didn’t know what to do. His kiss woke me up and I realized what I’ve done. But I couldn’t stop. Luke was straddled over top and liplocked with me. I tried to pull away but Luke pulled me closer and slid his tongue in my mouth as we kissed some more. He pulled away for a second to take off his shirt but I quickly sat up. My heart was pounding and I felt really dizzy.


Tori: “I…. no. no.”

Luke: “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to.”

Tori: “no no this is all my fault.”

Luke: “no it’s mine, I took advantage of you when I shouldn’t have”

Tori: “oh no, Brayden..!”

I ran upstairs to find Brayden on the floor in the kitchen.

Tori: “Brayden, Brayden wake up. Wake up babe.”

Brayden: “ughh what, what’s wrong?”

Tori: “Babe, you passed out. How do you feel?”

Brayden: “like shit. Where’s luke?”

Tori: “uhhhh..”


Luke walked upstairs a little after me and walked into the kitchen.

Luke: “I’m right here. C’mon lets get you up off the floor”

Luke helped Brayden up and carried him into the bathroom, I followed.

Brayden: “uhhhh I don’t feel so good”


All of a sudden Brayden started throwing up into the toilet. I sat right next to him and rubbed his back, making sure he’s ok. Luke got him a wet wash cloth and put it on his head. When he was done, he got up walked to the couch and laid down. But then, I didn’t feel so great either and I started throwing up. Luke held my hair back and rubbed my back, comforting me. After, I got up, Luke helped me into the living room with Brayden and sat me down on the couch. Boy was it going to be a long night.

Notes

plot twist?!?!?!?!11?1!


party outfit

Comments

I'm absolutely addicted! I come on about four times every day and I keep rereading the whole thing! I love it! It just proves that anyone can do anything! GO FLYERS!!!!! Good luck tonight!

Psquared91 Psquared91
1/16/14
@leannaa10 thank you!!! :)

bschenn10 bschenn10
11/28/13
Ahhhh I love the plot twist please keep writing!!!
leannaa10 leannaa10
11/28/13
@HabsFan24 thank you so much!

bschenn10 bschenn10
8/22/13
really good!
HabsFan24 HabsFan24
8/22/13