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Flight

So, Can You Find and Save Kaner?

2014-2015

Jonathan Toews entered the North End entrance and walked into where Brad and Evelyn were. He looked like a nervous wreck. By now, she had saved him so much and so many times that he knew her real identity and her secret headquarters. He was the only mortal to know this though. And that made him even more valuable. But for some reason, he hadn’t been the target this time. It had been Patrick Kane.

The redhead walked over, in her mortal form, a young adult look with jeans and a t-shirt and confronted him. “Alright, Jonny, you mortal, tell me word-for-word what happened with Kaner.”

"Mortal?" Jonathan questioned. "I'm a human!"

"You're a normal human being and according to Brad, you're known as a mortal. Now what about Kaner!"

"Okay..." the Blackhawk trailed off, feeling awkward.

Brad eyed Jonathan, getting to his feet and folding his arms in front of him. He naturally wasn’t one to have the "mortals" in the lair, but this was different and he was only just being extremely cautious as he should.

Evelyn looked at her superior and sent him a look. He rolled his eyes and sat down in his chair and spun around to his computer. She took Jonathan’s arm and led him toward the back part of the room...it was more private here and they could communicate better with one another. Also, the heroine had the feeling that Jonathan Toews didn’t want Brad knowing about this.

“Alright, Jonny,” Evelyn prompted. “What’s going on?”

Jonathan grabbed her by the shoulders and looked her in the eye. “I was going to tell Kaner about you and I, but when we went to head back inside, this-this hawk creature who was named Eric Strum showed up and attacked Patrick. I tried to stop him, but this guy Strum just didn’t have it. He kidnapped Kaner and disappeared with him. The real strange part is that he was EXACTLY like your--”

“Like Black Hawk?”

“Yeah.” The Captain of Chicago scratched behind his ears, nervously. “But we need to find Kaner. I can’t play without him!”

Evelyn nodded. “You’re probably right that you can’t. Patrick’s important to the Blackhawks’ attack and team roster. I will help you.”

“I knew you would!” Jonathan smiled.

"We on still for the date?"

"What about after we save Kaner and the NHL?"

"But Jonny, you know I've had this planned for us for a while. It's our one month anniversary of me and you and me saving you!"

"I know, but Kaner should come first."

"I guess you're right!" She looked down at her feet and shuffled them nervously. She knew that they would have the date still. They could hurry up and save Kaner too. It would work out and is was their annual anniversary.

Jonathan smiled sweetly and wrapped his arms around his superhero girlfriend and pulled her close to him. Evelyna pressed her lips to the hockey players’ and they began to kiss and make out, before a snorting sound interrupted them.

“Evelyn! There is no time for that nonsense!” Brad Hawkley snapped. “Now, I have some gadgets and whatnot for you, but I suggest you get help for this case.”

“Why?”

“It sounds like there might be some Russian issues.”

“Russian?”

“Yes. I did some looking into this Eric Strum guy. If you want to speak about private matters, you need to find somewhere else, because I could hear everything you said. But no matter...seems like he’s quite a dirty scum in the KHL. If he’s kidnapped Kane, I fear that there is something huge going on here.”

Jonathan looked at the manager guy. “Of course there’s something huge going on! Kaner was kidnapped! Duh!”

“Mr. Toews, as a leader of a hockey team in the NHL, I would expect you to be more conscious of your blatant envy and also more considerate of what I am telling you. Do not disrespect me.”

“Sorry.” Jonathan looked down at his feet.

Evelyn patted him, pouting her lip.

Brad continued to speak once more. “Because it appears like this is KHL and Russian based, I suggest you contact your little Russian friend from Dallas and get his help?”

“Nichy?” I questioned.

“Valeri Ivanovich Nichushkin, yes.”

“Nichushkin?” Jonathan complained. “But he’s a Dallas Star! He’s a rival of mine.”

“He’s my friend, Jonny and we will need him. C’mon, Nichy’s a great guy!”

“But he’s a Star!”

“Better than a Blues player, eh?”

Jonathan wrinkled his nose. “Okay, you’re right...you win.”

The redhead giggled and tapped the brunette’s nose with her index finger. “You’re crazy and adorable Jonny!”

“Evelyn! Focus, woman!” Brad spat.

She apologized, but grabbed the centre’s hand into her own and followed the older man over to his computer.

"Don't forget about your other friend, Brooke. She's going to be value with her brains and smarts," Brad added on, as he pressed a button on the panel.

There was a door in the panel area. He opened it and pulled out some walkie-talkie watches (four of them - even though Evelyn already had one), a can of some sorts with unknown and apparently deadly toxins, some mini pucks (or small black disks) and a few other spy-type stuff that would be useful.

Jonathan and Evelyn were passed the items, which they each put into a single bag, which was carried by Jonathan. They bid Brad farewell and were off to find the heroine’s friends. One of the friends was the girl named Kelly MacKinnon, who was still in the headquarters, but had gone off to a separate area to practice her telepathy and "fire powers."

Brooke Johnson and Val Nichushkin were the other two friends.

Notes

Valeri!! <3 :D
Time for some fun everyone!! ;)
**Pucks are sometimes called "disks", just so you know. ;)


Next up: Meet the trio and Valeri! :)





Comments

@EvelynaKitty
1-3. Awesome! :D
4. Okay, cool! :)
5. Okay, I'll message you the limitations for Black Hole Creation ;)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/16/15

@A Shruinger
1. :D
2. Okay, I'll look at that. ;)
3. XD
4. Okay. True, you are right. I'll put twinkling in then instead of flickering. :)
5. Understandable and yeah, I'll message you further with it when you reply next. And you can also list the limitations in the message too for me. The ones you find out from the page that is. :)

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
2/15/15

@EvelynaKitty
1. You're welcome! ;)
2. Um, the one like when Z says something like, "Stay out of trouble, Val," in Russian and all the Russian below that ;)
3. Hahaha! I also have a Russian keyboard ;) Cool! :)
4. Oh...that's more like 'twinkling,' not 'flickering.' Flickering is more like, suddenly, slashy, movements, making things disappear and reappear quickly, like a flame or a glitch. Twinkling is like sparkling, the brightness softly growing bright then dimming down. I think you mean 'twinkling' since stars twinkle, not flicker.
5. Yea, great power does come with great exhaustion when used! XD But it's not fun when two superhumans have the same limitations. :P Instead, maybe like let her struggle making the black hole, like let her have a hard time creating it and controlling it (with this, you'll have to redo the last chapter :P ) Or maybe there's this one limitation I read where when a user uses her power, then she can't use like her power for like a certain amount of time; applied to this: if Z uses her Black Hole Creation, then she can't use her powers for like, let's say, a week. I dunno. Those are some limitations there. But I can also go back to the profile of the Black Hole Creation to see the limitations on there. And she's gotta watch out with that hold too because she just might suck in some people/objects that aren't suppose to go in there X) But yea, you can email or message me about this if you'd like to :) I can't tell you, I'll spoil it for ya! ;) And that's right, I gotta get on typing up the update! I shall do that like right now ;)
You're totally welcome! :)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/15/15

@A Shruinger
1. Hmmmm....okay, I remember double checking it and putting the right one in. But maybe not...I don't know, if it's wrong I'll change it. Thanks.
2. Weird...I normally do. What are the phrases that need translations??
3. I'll fix that via my handy-dandy Russian keyboard. :)
4. Yeah, like a star flickers in the night sky, that's one I am picturing, which should just be flickered. :)
5. Okay, yeah, what do you suggest with the limits for her then. And I don't want to go into too much detail here with it...it can happen in the sequel but that is a helpful thing to know. I mean Jonny can get so mad he exhausts himself and almost kills himself, so Zvezda should have something like that, that is true. But I'm not sure what limits to the Black Hole or her Power of the Stars can be. (We chat about this through email or the message system though.) It's not Tavy or Jonny though, right? It's NEMO!!!! Or Kari!!
Thanks! XD

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
2/15/15

Okay, I read and this is what I got:
1. For the subtitle for this chapter, I translated and the first part was translated to 'Star of my charcter...,' so I decided to help ya out and for 'Star is my hero,' I got 'Звезда мой герой.' ;)
2. Can you put in translations, please? 8)
3. 'ладно' needs to be capitalized: 'Ладно.'
4. 'Flickered away.' Can you describe this more beacuse I picture her just glitching into nothingless, unless that's what you're aiming for :P
5. Alright, so I think Z's unstoppable because she can make black holes easily. And no one would be able to stand up to her with that great of power (unless they have something that has to do with taking away powers or nullifying powers or having omnipotence, then it's fine). Maybe with her creating such a powerful thing, she should have like a cost to it or a struggle making it so that it can be difficult and the villains can have somewhat of an edge. Maybe put a limitation. Because if a character has very powerful powers, then it'll be easy for them and the plot wouldn't be that strong, including the climax and it's expected for that character to win easily due to the strong powers. So I highly recommand putting limitations on her-- Don't worry, I have a character coming up in Mission very soon that is going to have GREAT power, but he's gonna have many limitations so that he can be somewhat vulnerable and make things less easy for him ;) Either place limitations or have a villain that is very powerful (but not too powerful, of course)! Just a tip for creating a better superhero story ;)
Other than that, all good! :)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/15/15