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Flight

Spencer and The Techies

Back on the pier, a few minutes later, Evelyn blinked awake. She pushed herself up, realizing she had a huge headache. She touched her lip and found that it was tingling there. Then her eyes narrowed and she jumped up to her feet.

“JONNY!!” she screamed. “Jonathan!”

She shook her head, as she came to the understanding that he was gone. The villain guy, the Brawler had kidnapped him. He was gone and it had been a while since she had failed to save him. She didn’t like failing...who did?

“Jonny, I will find you and Kaner too. I’ll save you both. No one messes with the Chicago Blackhawks!”

Her wings fluttered. Right now, thanks to her emotions, they were fluttering rapidly with her emotional turmoil. She was mad at the man who’d kidnapped both Blackhawk forward. She didn’t like it, being the protector of the team.

But she knew she had to get back to her friends now and they had to have some kind of clue as to where Jonathan and Patrick had been taken to. It was the only option at the moment. She lifted off the ground and zoomed into the night air. She arrived back at Brooke’s house and dropped onto the ground.

She walked up to the front door and knocked. Kelly answered it and allowed her in. Inside, Brooke and Val were sitting on the couch talking to a computer. They motioned Evelyn over.

“Where Jonathan?” Val asked, concerned.

“Some guy named the Brawler kidnapped him. We gotta hurry up and discover the hideout of these new villains and where Patrick and Jonathan are, otherwise, we’ll never find them...and we’ll lose ‘em! Please tell me you got something good for me?”

“Well,” Brooke began, glancing up at her from the computer. “We do. Come, join us.”

“What--? What are you doing?” the redhead questioned.

“Sit down and talk to Techies with us. Fill ‘em in on what happened to you!” Val explained further. He glanced to Brooke, who gave him a thumbs up and he beamed.

“Oh...no….not the--” she began to say, before she was interrupted.

“Yeah, it’s the Techies and your number one Techie, Spence! Whasup Black Hawk?!” a voice came from the computer. The superheroine rolled her eyes and groaned.

“Spencer!!” Evelyn growled, as she stormed over to the computer.

On the screen was a small box with the image of a person. The program up was similar to Skype. The person in the middle of the picture was a golden brown haired man with crystal blue eyes behind a pair of “smart” nerd-like glasses. He was smirking at them.

Brooke looked at her friend. “Spencer was helping us out. He tracked down Strum after some serious hard work.”

“Good job Spencer, but I’m still furious about what happened last time. Don’t think I’ve forgotten.”

“Not at all. And I’m sorry I gave you the wrong time and location. How many times must I say that?”

“You almost killed Jonathan!! You’re just lucky my Hawk Vision worked.”

“And whose fault was it this time? He’s not here, so I can only assume you failed to save him again. But it wasn’t me this time.”

“Don’t push things! I’m not in the mood.” She leaned back and folded her arms across her chest and pouted her lip in anger.

His image shrugged and he fixed the glasses on the bridge of his nose. “You two want to tell her?”

Val turned to her and jumped into telling the story, before Brooke could. The curly brunette girl looked at Spencer and sent him a wink. The Russian launched into the story: “As I have heard it, Spencer found out that Strum is in Moscow, Russia. He is linked to the KHL and is apart of some rogue hockey player group called the Legend of Doom. They are a wicked group that is led by someone named Kaleta--” (He has good English here, because he is talking about what they have found out, so he knows.)

“Kaleta? Like Patrick Kaleta?” Evelyn questioned, raising an eyebrow and slowly letting her arms come undone.

“Affirmative!” Spencer remarked.

She sent him a quick look, before attempting to take everyone there into her eyesight. “But he’s a Buffalo Sabre.”

“Evelyn, let Val finish. Then you can ask questions,” Brooke remarked, twirling her finger in her hair and patting the blond Russian kid on the shoulder.

Evelyn sat back and nodded. “Speak Valeri.”

“Kaleta apparently founded the group, drawing in many supporters. But he has four main “henchmen”: Strum, John Scott and Vanek--” (Again, good English here, because he is repeating what Brooke and Spencer have told him to say.)

“Thomas Vanek?”

“Yes.”

“And John Scott? He’s the guy who kidnapped Jonny! He called himself The Brawler!”

“Indeed. Vanek, Strum, Kaleta and The Brawler all make up this Legend of Doom, - LOD - which is centered in Moscow. They hate the NHL and are out to destroy its reputation and restore it to it’s rough and tumble ways,” Spencer took over the explanation now.

“So Kaner and Tazer have what to do with this?” Evelyn pressed, curiously.

"Because they--" Val started to say, before Brooke put her arm out and shoved him deeper into the couch, as she leaned forward to look at her friend.

She spoke now. “We believe that, after some research, Kaner and Tazer possess some kind of positive offensive energy in them. They are the originators of the “offensive only” mentality.”

“What about Tyler Seguin, isn't he technically of the "offensive only" mentality?”

Brooke let Val pop back up, as she shrugged and said, “Seguin’s not pure of heart, one and two, he came years later. Patrick Kane and Jonathan Toews are technically the “beginning of the new era in hockey” - in the NHL of course - but that means that if the LOD want to restore the old ways, killing the new way is the only option.”

“So they’re going to "destroy" Kazer?”

“Affirmative!” Spencer remarked again. “Unless you and your super friends can stop them and save them, they are doomed.”

(This was so much cooler in my dream...)

“Then we have to get a move on!! We have to find them both!” Evelyn jumped to her feet.

“Yes, yes, that would be the best option. I already programed myself into the watches from Brad. And if you guys need help anymore from me, I got the other Techies here at ready. My crew can get you the information you need,” Spencer said from the computer, holding his hand up to the webcam to show them.

“Thanks Spencer. I think we are done for now,” Kelly stated. She had been hanging off to the side of the couch, standing and playing with her wand.

“Whoa, whoa, first, do you have an answer as to what exactly the LOD wants with Kazer?” Evelyn brought up.

“Uh, for destroying the NHL as we know it now,” Kelly exclaimed.

“No, no, not that. There’s got to be more to it. Like how would destroying them destroy the NHL?” the super heroine stated, dismissively and puzzlingly.

Spencer spoke up. “I’ll have my people look into it for you.”

Evelyn shook her head. She leaned toward the computer for a closer look. “If Kaner and Tazer are special and hold the key to the NHL’s offensive mentality, that would mean that they have powers and are special...which would mean that they aren’t mortal.”

Spencer nodded. “Precisely. Look, we’ll research it for you and let you know. But for all we know, it’s just their talent that is their power, and that’s very mortal.”

"Alright, get on it Spence." Evelyn ordered and received a head nod from the Techie. She turned the computer screen off and shut the lid. Then she turned to her friends, who were looking at her with anxious faces. “Let’s go save some Blackhawks!!”

“Ooh! Can we refer to this mission as Operation: Kazer!?” Kelly exclaimed.

Evelyn laughed and put an arm around her magical friend. “Sure, Kelly. But let’s go -- to the Hawk Mobile!!”

And with that, the four friends darted out and hopped into the black Charger car and zoomed off, with Evelyn at the controls and driving. Val and Brooke were in the backseat and Kelly was in the passenger seat. She was happily flicking her wand about.

“Kelly, careful! Watch it!”

Then the redhead superheroine jammed her finger on a button and the vehicle launched off into the air, and vanished from the skies of Boston. It reappeared in the skies over the Russian city of Moscow.

Notes

So, um, I haven't forgotten about it, I am going to be going back over this and correcting errors. Don't worry.


Next up: Trouble in Russia

Comments

@EvelynaKitty
1-3. Awesome! :D
4. Okay, cool! :)
5. Okay, I'll message you the limitations for Black Hole Creation ;)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/16/15

@A Shruinger
1. :D
2. Okay, I'll look at that. ;)
3. XD
4. Okay. True, you are right. I'll put twinkling in then instead of flickering. :)
5. Understandable and yeah, I'll message you further with it when you reply next. And you can also list the limitations in the message too for me. The ones you find out from the page that is. :)

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
2/15/15

@EvelynaKitty
1. You're welcome! ;)
2. Um, the one like when Z says something like, "Stay out of trouble, Val," in Russian and all the Russian below that ;)
3. Hahaha! I also have a Russian keyboard ;) Cool! :)
4. Oh...that's more like 'twinkling,' not 'flickering.' Flickering is more like, suddenly, slashy, movements, making things disappear and reappear quickly, like a flame or a glitch. Twinkling is like sparkling, the brightness softly growing bright then dimming down. I think you mean 'twinkling' since stars twinkle, not flicker.
5. Yea, great power does come with great exhaustion when used! XD But it's not fun when two superhumans have the same limitations. :P Instead, maybe like let her struggle making the black hole, like let her have a hard time creating it and controlling it (with this, you'll have to redo the last chapter :P ) Or maybe there's this one limitation I read where when a user uses her power, then she can't use like her power for like a certain amount of time; applied to this: if Z uses her Black Hole Creation, then she can't use her powers for like, let's say, a week. I dunno. Those are some limitations there. But I can also go back to the profile of the Black Hole Creation to see the limitations on there. And she's gotta watch out with that hold too because she just might suck in some people/objects that aren't suppose to go in there X) But yea, you can email or message me about this if you'd like to :) I can't tell you, I'll spoil it for ya! ;) And that's right, I gotta get on typing up the update! I shall do that like right now ;)
You're totally welcome! :)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/15/15

@A Shruinger
1. Hmmmm....okay, I remember double checking it and putting the right one in. But maybe not...I don't know, if it's wrong I'll change it. Thanks.
2. Weird...I normally do. What are the phrases that need translations??
3. I'll fix that via my handy-dandy Russian keyboard. :)
4. Yeah, like a star flickers in the night sky, that's one I am picturing, which should just be flickered. :)
5. Okay, yeah, what do you suggest with the limits for her then. And I don't want to go into too much detail here with it...it can happen in the sequel but that is a helpful thing to know. I mean Jonny can get so mad he exhausts himself and almost kills himself, so Zvezda should have something like that, that is true. But I'm not sure what limits to the Black Hole or her Power of the Stars can be. (We chat about this through email or the message system though.) It's not Tavy or Jonny though, right? It's NEMO!!!! Or Kari!!
Thanks! XD

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
2/15/15

Okay, I read and this is what I got:
1. For the subtitle for this chapter, I translated and the first part was translated to 'Star of my charcter...,' so I decided to help ya out and for 'Star is my hero,' I got 'Звезда мой герой.' ;)
2. Can you put in translations, please? 8)
3. 'ладно' needs to be capitalized: 'Ладно.'
4. 'Flickered away.' Can you describe this more beacuse I picture her just glitching into nothingless, unless that's what you're aiming for :P
5. Alright, so I think Z's unstoppable because she can make black holes easily. And no one would be able to stand up to her with that great of power (unless they have something that has to do with taking away powers or nullifying powers or having omnipotence, then it's fine). Maybe with her creating such a powerful thing, she should have like a cost to it or a struggle making it so that it can be difficult and the villains can have somewhat of an edge. Maybe put a limitation. Because if a character has very powerful powers, then it'll be easy for them and the plot wouldn't be that strong, including the climax and it's expected for that character to win easily due to the strong powers. So I highly recommand putting limitations on her-- Don't worry, I have a character coming up in Mission very soon that is going to have GREAT power, but he's gonna have many limitations so that he can be somewhat vulnerable and make things less easy for him ;) Either place limitations or have a villain that is very powerful (but not too powerful, of course)! Just a tip for creating a better superhero story ;)
Other than that, all good! :)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/15/15