Time Stands Still - Comments

@A Shruinger
Hmmmm....you are kind of right. But it is kind of like the Bobby Ryan circumstance. Technically they weren't his "parents", they just took him in until he could get his own place or find a roommate. Or maybe it's like with Nichy, I think he is staying with Sergei, so is Sergei technically his "father", I would say that he is more like a foster parental figure...not necessarily a father.....but I don't know....I'm not really sure anymore or what I was really going for.... :P :DDDD :)
You're welcome. I tried to make it as entertaining as possible, without completely destroying the characters *cough* Seguin *cough* XD

@EvelynaKitty
*tilts head from side to side, thinking* But practically, Nemo is his father since he raised him up and everything and told him what to do (I hope so), he's just not his biological father. So yea... But if you don't want to change it, then that's perfectly fine ;)
But thanks again for making this story--it was entertaining! :D

@A Shruinger
I don't think that its a big deal. If we think of it like he never really "knew" and Nemo's not his REAL father, just foster/adoptive father, so I guess it works okay, unless I am wrong....
Sweet!! I tried not to make it so obvious, but also make it kind of shocking. I'm glad it worked (somewhat)..... :)

Well... The only thing is that in Chapter 4, Tyler said that Nemo wasn't his father... Should you fix that?
But other than that, it works out fine! :)

@A Shruinger
Well, I already was planning on it, but it wasn't too obvious was it? And it worked, right?
Thank you, thank you! :)

*applause, applause*

I knew that something like Nemo being related to Tyler was gonna come... But good job on that! ;)

@Matty
Haha, maybe in a sequel that will come later on! Thanks for reading!! :D

@A Shruinger
Now you get to know....I did good right?

I hope our detectives do not fall victim to the Magician again...oh wait, maybe I do. Poor Val

OHMYGOSH, NEMO WHY DO YOU CARE SO MUCH ABOUT TYLER??‽!!! 8|

Oh no...Nemo's gonna act weird... I wonder how... 8)))) Tbh, I'm so excited to see how Nemo's gonna act weird!!! :)

@A Shruinger
Ha! Yeah, it's almost like a disney twin lol, especially when he has the floppy hair look. And I changed the issue. Thanks for the heads up, it helps me to know if there are any mistakes, so I can quickly change it! :) I can do that with you too if you want. If I see any issues... :) (Grammatically of course!)

@EvelynaKitty
Good! Eh, now that you mentioned it, I get the connection. ;)

@A Shruinger
Yeah, it is. I'll fix that, thanks! But doesn't Tyler remind you of Flynn Rider, with the smoldering look and getting at females....lol ;)

Poor Brad... He should've beaten up those people! X( I hope he gets his phone back 8(

Val is so cute! 8)

@A Shruinger
Oh okay! I thought he did. That's strange that you picture him in glasses though XD

@EvelynaKitty
No, no, he doesn't! Never saw him wearing them before! XD