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Time Stands Still

Summary

Awkward Man, Reilly Smith and Shy Boy, Valeri Nichushkin, his assistant, work as HDA (Hockey Detective Agency) detective interns during the offseason. They are assigned to a new case, by Head Senior Detective, Antti Niemi, which focuses on protecting a former Boston Bruin player, Tyler Seguin. After Tyler gets in trouble with fans and has his life threatened, they must watch over him and protect him from the menacing Katie and Tommy, who are a couple of psycho Boston teens.

When Tyler refuses protection, he is hunted down by the teens who trick him into coming with them. After he discovers who they are, the two brutally kidnap him. They take him back to Boston with them, where they explain why the threats were made and why they loathe him so much.

Can Detective Duo Val Nichushkin and Reilly Smith overcome fears and awkwardness to save him?


**PG-13 for mild violence, language, and hints at disturbing things and blood

**The texts, tweets, and threatening messages were inspired by the "Pretty Little Liars" books. If they seem somewhat familiar, they are. I re-worded a few to make them fit Tyler and the storyline. I am giving the author credit for helping me out. Thanks :) (I wanted to add this here, for copyright purposes.)



Characters

Antti Niemi "Nemo"

Antti Niemi "Nemo"

The HDA Boss in Dallas' Division, recruits Reilly Smith, Brandon Saad, and Val Nichushkin. It is revealed at the end that he has a secret no one knows.

Bradley Marchand "Brad" "Marchy"

Bradley Marchand "Brad" "Marchy"

Tyler's best friend, who involuntarily leads the duo of Katie and Tommy to his friend. He helps the HDA to track them down, after finding out about Tyler's kidnapping.

Katie and Tommy

Katie and Tommy

The psychotic duo from Boston, who threaten Tyler and then kidnap him to teach him a lesson!

Reilly Smith "Reils"/"Smitty"

Reilly Smith "Reils"/"Smitty"

Veteran Private Eye for the HDA, partners with Val Nichushkin for a strange case

Taylor Lonestar

Taylor Lonestar

Tyler's lead "Seguinista", who helps him out with his problems. A devout Christian, true to her faith. She isn't Tyler's girlfriend, but he does trust her with his feelings. They are close friends, I guess you could say.

Tyler Seguin "Ty"

Tyler Seguin "Ty"

The troublesome little heart-throb of Dallas. He misuses and abuses his online freedom, creating borderline tweets that could be taken the wrong way. He makes two enemies in Boston natives Katie and Tommy, who kidnap him and make him pay. He matures and changes, learning from the instance.

Valeri Nichushkin "Val"

Valeri Nichushkin "Val"

An HDA private eye-in-training. He is partnered with Reilly Smith for a strange case.

Chapters

Comments

@A Shruinger
Hmmmm....you are kind of right. But it is kind of like the Bobby Ryan circumstance. Technically they weren't his "parents", they just took him in until he could get his own place or find a roommate. Or maybe it's like with Nichy, I think he is staying with Sergei, so is Sergei technically his "father", I would say that he is more like a foster parental figure...not necessarily a father.....but I don't know....I'm not really sure anymore or what I was really going for.... :P :DDDD :)
You're welcome. I tried to make it as entertaining as possible, without completely destroying the characters *cough* Seguin *cough* XD

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
8/23/14

@EvelynaKitty
*tilts head from side to side, thinking* But practically, Nemo is his father since he raised him up and everything and told him what to do (I hope so), he's just not his biological father. So yea... But if you don't want to change it, then that's perfectly fine ;)
But thanks again for making this story--it was entertaining! :D

A Shruinger A Shruinger
8/23/14

@A Shruinger
I don't think that its a big deal. If we think of it like he never really "knew" and Nemo's not his REAL father, just foster/adoptive father, so I guess it works okay, unless I am wrong....
Sweet!! I tried not to make it so obvious, but also make it kind of shocking. I'm glad it worked (somewhat)..... :)

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
8/23/14

Well... The only thing is that in Chapter 4, Tyler said that Nemo wasn't his father... Should you fix that?
But other than that, it works out fine! :)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
8/23/14

@A Shruinger
Well, I already was planning on it, but it wasn't too obvious was it? And it worked, right?
Thank you, thank you! :)

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
8/23/14