AAOOOSC!: The Mission - Comments, page 5

@EvelynaKitty
Makes a tornado. Captures Tazer and Black Hawk in it. Kicks Black Hawk out of Mississauga. Brings Tazer back to his house on a fluffy cloud so that he wouldn't get hurt. Bam. Don't mess with John! ;)
Ooooo....man....a story? I don't know if they'll mix... I hate to say this, but John will totally over-power Black Hawk with his abilities :P Their abilities don't mix together to fight equally as a duo--one of them will do most of the work :P Sorry.... :PPPP But I see where you got the idea from since they both have Toews! ;) XD

Dodges lightning bolt and steals Jonny and zooms off. Boom. Don't mess with Black Hawk! :PPPP haha no, no they should work together maybe. Ooh ooh what if you did that as a story! Tavy and Black Hawk meet have a spat and then team up together and save Jonny!! :)

@EvelynaKitty
Thunder storm. Lightning. Bam, dead.
I am so mean :PPP Just don't mess with John!

He can try, but no one is match for Black Hawk and her might caw (and wing wind) :)

@EvelynaKitty
If Black Hawk tries to save Tazer, John would step right in front of her and knock the wind outta her before she can say, "I'm here to save you, Johnny!" No one can compare to John's magnificent powers! MOO-HA-HA! X)

Ha! Maybe Black Hawk can get him...oh wait she cares more about Jonny! Tavy better watch out. He's taking her job haha! :)

@EvelynaKitty
Hahaaahahaaa! XD Good one, but no, he's just hanging out in the EHP HQs waiting to be saved poor dude :PPP XD
Yup! When Toews is around, so is John! :DDD

Awwwwww What's Kaner gonna be doing until 22, he should be dead by then. ;) haha nah, just kidding. Oh Kanerboo you little hostage you. :P but JONNY!!!! Yay! And cool Tavy! :)

@EvelynaKitty
Okay, good! :)
Errr...let's see, shall we? Actually, Tazer is in the next chapter ;) And Kaner comes back in...Chapter 22!!! XDDDD THAT'S SO LONG!!! Oh man, but after that, he's like practically gonna be in the rest of the chapters, so yea... ;)

Haha. Okay. All of that is fine. with Brad i was feeling it when he runs into Tuukka, but I reread it again and I think you are fine, it was just weird when Kari said "hand him to me"...or something like that! ;)
i miss Kanerboo and Jonny... :( when do they come back, like what chapter?

@EvelynaKitty
Thanks! :) Yea, after Tuukka became the owner of El Choowe, I couldn't picture him evil anymore! XD
Ohhhh...no, I wouldn've said that he turned back into a honey badger. Put I am sure that I did put in that he turned back to himself. Yea, that's what I said: he turned back to himself--Brad's no longer a honey badger. I didn't elaborated on it because I'm a bit effy when it comes to the transformation people turning big or turning into animals and the other way around, so I just go straight to the point that Kari turns Brad back to himself. Not a lot of description of that, it's kinda hidden and you might've missed it if you were just scanning (that usually happens to me), so yea... But I did put in that he turned back to himself and I didn't say anything about him turning back into a honey badger. Do you think there's a way I could clarify that or it's just you? :P XD
Thanks! :DDDD Actaully with Kaner, I was gonna put him in this chapter being rescued, but a found out that I actually put him later on in the story, so he will be back (I hadn't forgotten about him!!!), it's just that he's still in hostage, poor dude! XDD

Ahhhhhh!!!! Nice Chapter!! Yay Tuukka's not evil.
One thing though, it feels like Brad was a honey badger again at the end, can you just clarify if he is or isn't in wording. If you have him being a honey badger again at the end, then you would just need to put in that he somehow changed back, otherwise, maybe it's just me. :P
But love it!!! Where's Kanerboo though???? Poor baby blondie. :(

@EvelynaKitty
That would be terrible. Very terrible. Not a good author habit :P But how can you forget about Brad? I mean, yea, maybe physcially because he's so small XDDD but not mentally because he can really stick to your mind XD

@A Shruinger
Haha, I certainly hope you don't and haven't forgotten about him :P

@EvelynaKitty
You shall see in the next update! I hadn't forgetten about him yet ;)

Yeah what happened to Super Honey Badger???????? :PPPPP

@EvelynaKitty
I don't know if Kaner should get it badly from Kari...maybe...
Oh yea, I meant to put in where Sid and Nathan are at :P Whoops, I shall put that in!
Oh gosh, thanks for pointing that out! I'll fix that right now ;)

Heehee...Kanerboo's gonna get it...from Kari, so badly!! :P (Why does this make me smile and laugh?) And what about Kinny and Sid? Where they at? Oh man!!!! Nice, nice. One thing though, can you space out the change from when you go from Kari's lair to the GHP???? Yeah, it's one long paragraph right now, and I know those are two separate places. :)

This part:
Kari looks up at the hole Ben lift behind. "Lovely." He sighs, exiting the room. "For now, I'll give the GHP a little visit to see if they're behind this... Because I'm sure they did all this."
Meanwhile, the GHP that stayed behind are in the main room, cleaning.
"Okay, so if the HQs can repair itself, it can't clean itself as well?" Jonathan asks, holding a feathered duster in his hand. He is on top of a little ladder, in front of a doorway.

Should be this:
Kari looks up at the hole Ben lift behind. "Lovely." He sighs, exiting the room. "For now, I'll give the GHP a little visit to see if they're behind this... Because I'm sure they did all this."

Meanwhile, the GHP that stayed behind are in the main room, cleaning.
"Okay, so if the HQs can repair itself, it can't clean itself as well?" Jonathan asks, holding a feathered duster in his hand. He is on top of a little ladder, in front of a doorway.

Small little thing. ;)

@lazyisscoreee
Why is the carpet wet, Bords? *I don't know how to spell his nickname so whatevs, dude :P

I don't know Beau!