Alpha - Comments

Best story ever. Really enjoyed it so thanks for writing it. I lovr how in love they are with each other. So happy there will be a sequel best news ever. Can't wait to read it and see the future these two will have together.

Yes he told her that he loved her. And she said it back. absolutely brilliant. I never want this story to end. love them together

Seriously one of my favourite stories going right now. Can't wait for more!

So happy that she's not too hurt. so happy she told him that she needed him. he needs her too. it was huge that she admitted she needed him and for her to cry. and I loved that she called his place home and wanted to go to his house without being asked by tyler. love these two.

Oh I need another update so badly. at least she's able to make calls. I'm glad he knows he was an idiot and at least admits he loves her he just has to tell her now. hope she's ok. and the guys she works with.

Acting like a stupid immature kid is not the way to go about things Tyler urgh like I get what he's upset with her but they need to talk. And they are both as stubborn as each other which is not helping matters. I hope nothing bad happens to her. I hate that they haven't at least talked a little bit before she goes undercover. He knows she can take of herself but he loves her and is worried just like her sister and friends.

First of all thank you for the update. Secondly loved this chapter. I was so happy she went to meet him at the airport. He was so happy and excited it was so cute. I knew he wasn't going to react well to the news about her going undercover. even her own sister isn't happy about it. he's not saying she's not capableof doing her job he's just scared he' going to lose her. and he needs to tell her that. he's so in love with her.

I loved their text chat so cute. i'm worried she's going undercover so i don't know how tyler is going to manage. I hope she tells him and he doesn't find out from someone else. and I hope she'll be ok. I can't wait for some tyler and van alone time

So sos so happy he didn't do anything stupid. and squeal when he said girlfriend oh that was brilliant. I can't imagine her going through all that with her ex especially since she's so a strong woman now. I'm so glad they are in a good place and can't wait for then to spend more time together.

It’s good that she spoke about her past a little bit with her and I’m glad he admitted he was jealous and didn’t sleep with other women.

He’s probably going to mess up and sleep with other chick or complain to Jamie. They haven’t made it official and he’s freaking out over a picture.

@FootieJo
This last update took way too long, so I promise to have a new update within the next couple days, don't you worry!

no no no. we wait for days and you leave it like that. no he better do anything stupid. Van is so proud of him. she cares so much about him. he can't let jealousy get in the way. I hate misunderstandings. he needs to be smart for once in his life. urgh this is making me upset please don't leave it to long before the next update.

Aw they're so cute together:)

Love the banter between Jamie and Tyler! I wonder how he’s going to convice her that she isn’t another one night stand. He’s has it bad for her and it’s going to take a long while for her to get convinced.

Seggy is falling hard for Van. it's amazing how quickly it is happening. I love Alex and Jamie oh love Tyler with the proposal talk ha. I wonder what Tyler cam do to show Van is more special to him than anyone else. plus we and Tyler still have so much to learn about her past. as always love update

would love you load a if we could get another update soon please I love these two

haha love his reasoning with her. that was great and hot. oh I love these two together. can't wait for all the other firsts to come. and where did the condom come from. I'm surprised she didn't ask although I can understand why she was distracted though.

What a gentleman! Lol how sweet of him to carry her to his car. I feel like he’s going to be doing a lot of firsts with her.

Shower sex at the stadium? Yes please lol I’m glad she grilled him about his past because he’s known for being a hoe and he got deep into his feelings about his hoe past lol. I’m pretty sure on the next date he’s going to question her dating past.