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Oh please let shower sex be at the stadium ha that would be fun. I think it was important for her to talk to him about the second date. he made it clear that she's different. you can tell he has strong feelings for her.What about her past relationships? Tyler is getting all the stick but we don't know her past yet apart fron the one ex that was briefly mentioned. she should share more with Tyler. I love their chemistry and banter. I just love them together .

Hopefully he’s a good teacher lol and it’s going to interesting because since she’s used to being in control and he’s going to enjoy that because he’s teaching her something new that she hasn’t tried before.

I love the story. Their date is so cute. I can't wait to read what happens next.

This update made my day. Love how much hee friends are rooting for Savannah and Tyler. she so likes him more than she lets on. wish everyone would stop making a bog deal about tyler and going on kore than one date with a girl. yes it shows he likes her more than others bit I don't want her doubting him as a potential bf. Can't wait for their date. it's so cute. Their first was a gun range which is a huge part of her job and life and now their second is skating which is a huge part of his. love love love it

Have I said how much I love this story cos I really do. oh she's starting to like him as much as he likes her. her face when he said about the road trip she likes him being around. and Shea said they were dating. he's so sweet and caring and worried about her. I hope her job does get too dangerous i don't want anything to happen to her.can't wait for their second date. more soon please

Things are getting serious and it's about time for the second date. I like how he reminds her to be careful with her job and always worried about her.

She is so stubborn but I think she also likes that he's fussing and wanting to take care of her. like she knew he wasn't going to let her sleep alone. her dangerous job is something he's going to have to try and learn to deal with but it will be hard since he's really falling for her. I don't want him to get hurt. he's clearly getting attached. though she's getting closer to him. more soon please

It must be shocking to him that he has fallen for her so quick. It's cute that he wants to take care of her and wanting her to stay in his bedroom instead of the guest room.

Oh he so likes her. I don't think we'll maybe just a little about his ego that she left but also that he wanted to spend more time with her that the was disappointed she left in the morning. oh my heart when he found out she was in hospital. you can see how much he cares. she's so stubborn. he knows she can look after herself but he's still godforsaken want to take of her just like her sister and friends cos he cares. yes she's a strong woman but that shouldn't mean she should push people away. can't wait for more. and Jamie is going to kill Tyler if he keeps interrupting lol

Looks like Tyler is getting attached to her rather quickly and his ego can't handle the fact that she left him all alone in the morning.

He needs to step up his game and stop mentioning his other one night stands because she already knows he's a hoe.

love how they interact with each other. there's so much passion there too. oh I love them. I think he's past will be hard for her to get past at times but hes clearly crazy about her

love how they interact with each other. there's so much passion there too. oh I love them. I think he's past will be hard for her to get past at times but hes clearly crazy about her

On the next date he should bring the dogs and I like how he was listening to what she was teaching him. Hopefully the dogs make an appearance next chapter.

Loved it! I loved how even though it was her date, she still made him try and impress her. Keep it going, girl!

great start.love how he wanted her to enjoy the game. the gun range was brilliant. he's learning about what she likes and loved that she said he could show her how to shoot a hockey puck.she grew warmer to him as it went on. and she wasn't expecting Kylie to just be a friend instead of a hook up so I'm sure that threw her a bit but can't wait for more. the dogs are diffo a reason to date Tyler along with many more lol

I'm glad you included his dogs in this chapter and it's probably the first time in long time he slept over at a chicks place without having sex.

@FootieJo
I did see that!! Those doggies are too cute!

Aww that was so sweet that he went to her house. he really likes her. trying to hold her hand aww. I can't wait for their date.They really do find it easy to be in each others company. their banter is great and the dogs oh love. nice seeing a little of her jealousy tyler obviously is jealous of Liam so nice to see her thinking about the other girls tyler has being with and mot liking it. more soon please.

P.S. did you see Tyler's insta story of Gerry Marshall and cash omg how cute were they wagging their tails at him and his baby talk too them too cute

Seggy is jealous oh I love love love it. I love their banter. They get on so well through text that we need to see them together in the same place. cougar ha brilliant. he's so in to her. for a big play boy he's really into her already. he can't tell the sisters apart is interesting. I could totally see him confessing his feelings for Savannah to her thinking he was talking to Shea. you know he's pouting or drunk cos they've had a misunderstanding and he talks to Shea but it's actually Savannah. can't wait for their date. more soon please please