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Flight

Locating the Missing Blackhawks

Evelyn and her friends bolted out of the building, passing the record player. That was the only thing that didn’t make sense. Alexander Ovechkin didn’t know that Jonathan Toews’ scream would call her and he didn’t know about her physical training either. He knew her though, that was evident, but why was there a record player set up to draw them to the building playing Jonathan’s scream?

And she knew it definitely was his. She knew his distress call by heart, it was implanted into her brain. And yet…

Did she?

As soon as they exited the building, Evelyn was fully aware of her hearing returning to normal. She tapped into her mind and activated her vision. She could see through buildings and at the long range once more. She had her powers back. She glanced over to see Kelly waving her wand around, once more with lightning streaking out of the end.

It WAS Ovechkin's "powers" over the building. But that was also spooky and not a good thing that the Washington Capital's captain and leader had powers like that.

Soon they both stopped using their powers and faced Val and Brooke.

“So why the record player?” Kelly asked.

“Dammit Kelly!” Evelyn snapped. “Stop using your telepathic powers on me!”

“I can’t help it. You’re thoughts are so loud, I can’t even think straight.”

“Okay, okay, sorry. But I’m serious, I have a reason to think that.”

“Oh yes, I know why. I heard everything,” she tapped her head with two fingers.

Evelyn shook her head. “We need to focus on finding the Hawks: Jonny and Kaner, we can’t fuss over a stop record player.”

“Right! So where to?” Val asked. “Where we go?”

“That’s a good question Valeri, let’s walk around some and maybe think of something,” Evelyn stated.

They did so, walking in silence, led by a hawk-like heroine, but to pedestrians walking along, she was just weird and like she was in a costume. She had forgotten to deactivate her suit, but no one really cared. They quickly jogged past with strange expressions. They walked for a good fifteen minutes, before Evelyn’s watch went off.

“Hawkley,” she muttered and paused to press the buttons.

“Black Hawk, any news?” It wasn’t Hawkley...it was Spencer.

“Spencer!” Evelyn scolded. “Did you hack into Hawkley’s computer?”

“Maybe.”

“Spencer…!”

“Okay, I did. But I did for good reason!”

“Why?”

“I know why the so called Legend of Doom has Patrick and Jonathan...the REAL reason!”

“What?” Kelly, Brooke and Val gasped with Evelyn, as they came to huddle around her.

“Yeah, apparently they--” The screen on the watch faded to black, as if the connection had been dropped or lost...or worse, tampered with.

Suddenly, Evelyn dropped to the ground, gasping in pain. She glowed brightly and had static lightning bolts coming from her and she became mortal, without her even doing a thing or pressing anything. She looked up and saw Vanek standing at the end of the street, holding some kind of radar weapon.

Out of the ball laser point, the static slowly faded and ceased. Vanek was smirking evilly, as he pocketed it.

“I hoped it wouldn’t have to come to this. But the LOD needs the Russian!” Vanek snarled.

Val whimpered and hid in-between Brooke and Kelly. “No, no let him take me! I no want to go!”

“You have to go. You have to help us complete the plan.” Vanek snatched Val’s wrist and yanked him forward.

Kelly whipped out her wand and pointed it at Vanek. “Incendio Tria!” she shouted and the blast of orange fire light came from her wand and hit Vanek in the face, burning him. He released Val in the sudden panic, which was enough for Evelyn to recover and re-activate her hero form, pressing the watch’s buttons.

In a fury she forced her wings to flap in a frenzy and sent the villain flying backward, across the street to the other side.

“He’s not done,” Evelyn remarked.

Kelly nodded.

They both darted forward, toward him, as Brooke hugged Val close to her.

“Flagrate!” Kelly screamed, producing a long streamer-like light of fire out of the tip of her wand. She slashed it back and forth before her, like a dancer or like someone cracking a whip. She flung it at Vanek, whipping him in the face and burning him again.

Evelyn signaled to her friend to back off and she grabbed Vanek in her talon fingers and lifted him into the air.

“This again, sweetie?”

“I’m gonna teach you not to pick on Valeri Nichushkin, you aren’t getting him and while I have you hovering over your death, why don’t you tell me where the LOD is? Where’s Jonny and Patrick?”

“Wouldn’t you love to know the answer to that? By why ask me, when you have your Hawk Vision?”

“WHERE’S JONNY AND PATRICK??”

“Why would I tell you?”

“Because I’m going to make you!”

“Oh really and how’s that?”

Evelyn descended from the sky and landed on the ground. She gripped the villain tightly and called to Kelly.

“Now’s the perfect chance to test out those telepathic skills of yours Kells, make Vanek talk!”

“What? She can create magic and use telepathy?”

“Sucks you didn’t know, eh?” Kelly remarked, as she made the fire dissolve and whispered the incantation, as she put her wand tip to the villain’s forehead. It glowed blue and Kelly closed her eyes to focus.

Where’s Jonathan Toews and Patrick Kane? Tell me.

I won’t tell you.

Tell me.

Why?

Tell me. You want to tell me.

Their being held in the Luzhniki Small Sports Arena, Val knows the place. Kaleta has them tied up.

Thank you.


Kelly dropped her wand, which blinked off, with no blue light anymore. She folded her arms and grinned. “Luzhniki Small Sports Arena.”

“I know where that is!” Val exclaimed.

“I know, Vanek told me you would.”

“So what do we do about him?” Brooke questioned, nodding to the struggling villain in the superheroine’s hold.

“Go back to your friends and let them know that the party’s over. You failed and we’re coming and Black Hawk will save Jonathan and Patrick!”

“And I’ll do this, because...?”

“Because, otherwise, I’ll force you to, but holding onto you,” Evelyn remarked.

“And I won’t escape?”

“Not a chance!” Kelly snapped. She whacked him with her wand, hard.

He flinched and glared at her, but she whacked him again in the face. “Okay, okay, fine. Stop whacking me, Luna!”

“It’s Kelly!”

“Whatever, alright, I’ll go tell them, just leave me alone and let me go.”

Evelyn dragged him a good distance away and released him. “We’re following, so don’t try anything.”

“Got it.”

And with that Vanek walked off from them and Evelyn signaled to the others to follow. Not that they needed to, but they had to make sure Vanek didn’t deviate from the plan or vanish.

Notes

Luzhniki Small Sports Arena - The link to the Wiki page, for what this place is. :) If you're interested or I can just tell you it's the Arena for the Dynamo Moscow (Where Ovi, Nichy and probably every one of the NHL Russian players played.)
A Shruinger, you know what to do, I had Kelly using Telepathy...not sure if it is right, but this is what I envision someone with Telepathy doing with their powers.
Also....VANEK!!!!! :(((((


Next up: Checkin' In on Kazer!

Comments

@EvelynaKitty
1-3. Awesome! :D
4. Okay, cool! :)
5. Okay, I'll message you the limitations for Black Hole Creation ;)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/16/15

@A Shruinger
1. :D
2. Okay, I'll look at that. ;)
3. XD
4. Okay. True, you are right. I'll put twinkling in then instead of flickering. :)
5. Understandable and yeah, I'll message you further with it when you reply next. And you can also list the limitations in the message too for me. The ones you find out from the page that is. :)

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
2/15/15

@EvelynaKitty
1. You're welcome! ;)
2. Um, the one like when Z says something like, "Stay out of trouble, Val," in Russian and all the Russian below that ;)
3. Hahaha! I also have a Russian keyboard ;) Cool! :)
4. Oh...that's more like 'twinkling,' not 'flickering.' Flickering is more like, suddenly, slashy, movements, making things disappear and reappear quickly, like a flame or a glitch. Twinkling is like sparkling, the brightness softly growing bright then dimming down. I think you mean 'twinkling' since stars twinkle, not flicker.
5. Yea, great power does come with great exhaustion when used! XD But it's not fun when two superhumans have the same limitations. :P Instead, maybe like let her struggle making the black hole, like let her have a hard time creating it and controlling it (with this, you'll have to redo the last chapter :P ) Or maybe there's this one limitation I read where when a user uses her power, then she can't use like her power for like a certain amount of time; applied to this: if Z uses her Black Hole Creation, then she can't use her powers for like, let's say, a week. I dunno. Those are some limitations there. But I can also go back to the profile of the Black Hole Creation to see the limitations on there. And she's gotta watch out with that hold too because she just might suck in some people/objects that aren't suppose to go in there X) But yea, you can email or message me about this if you'd like to :) I can't tell you, I'll spoil it for ya! ;) And that's right, I gotta get on typing up the update! I shall do that like right now ;)
You're totally welcome! :)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/15/15

@A Shruinger
1. Hmmmm....okay, I remember double checking it and putting the right one in. But maybe not...I don't know, if it's wrong I'll change it. Thanks.
2. Weird...I normally do. What are the phrases that need translations??
3. I'll fix that via my handy-dandy Russian keyboard. :)
4. Yeah, like a star flickers in the night sky, that's one I am picturing, which should just be flickered. :)
5. Okay, yeah, what do you suggest with the limits for her then. And I don't want to go into too much detail here with it...it can happen in the sequel but that is a helpful thing to know. I mean Jonny can get so mad he exhausts himself and almost kills himself, so Zvezda should have something like that, that is true. But I'm not sure what limits to the Black Hole or her Power of the Stars can be. (We chat about this through email or the message system though.) It's not Tavy or Jonny though, right? It's NEMO!!!! Or Kari!!
Thanks! XD

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
2/15/15

Okay, I read and this is what I got:
1. For the subtitle for this chapter, I translated and the first part was translated to 'Star of my charcter...,' so I decided to help ya out and for 'Star is my hero,' I got 'Звезда мой герой.' ;)
2. Can you put in translations, please? 8)
3. 'ладно' needs to be capitalized: 'Ладно.'
4. 'Flickered away.' Can you describe this more beacuse I picture her just glitching into nothingless, unless that's what you're aiming for :P
5. Alright, so I think Z's unstoppable because she can make black holes easily. And no one would be able to stand up to her with that great of power (unless they have something that has to do with taking away powers or nullifying powers or having omnipotence, then it's fine). Maybe with her creating such a powerful thing, she should have like a cost to it or a struggle making it so that it can be difficult and the villains can have somewhat of an edge. Maybe put a limitation. Because if a character has very powerful powers, then it'll be easy for them and the plot wouldn't be that strong, including the climax and it's expected for that character to win easily due to the strong powers. So I highly recommand putting limitations on her-- Don't worry, I have a character coming up in Mission very soon that is going to have GREAT power, but he's gonna have many limitations so that he can be somewhat vulnerable and make things less easy for him ;) Either place limitations or have a villain that is very powerful (but not too powerful, of course)! Just a tip for creating a better superhero story ;)
Other than that, all good! :)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/15/15