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Flight

My Heroine - Zvezda (Star)!

One month later…

“Звезда, помоги мне! (Star, help me!)” a thick Russian accented scream split through the night air of Dallas, Texas.

Below, in the player’s parking lot for the Dallas Stars, three menacing-looking Minnesota Wild players had cornered the first line’s young blond winger, Valeri Nichushkin. He was backed against the wall of the arena. One of the Wild players lunged at him and the other two followed suit. The three of them grabbed Val’s arms and restrained him.

“Позвольте мне перейти! Звезда!! (Let me go! Star!!)”

“Shut up Russian!”

Two Wild players pinned his arms behind him and forced him to the ground. The third player withdrew a roll of black duct tape. He tore off a rectangular piece and slapped it over Val’s mouth. The blond Russian fidgeted, trying to pull free, but he was held securely in place. He grunted and let off distress noises.

“Ah, much better. You’re much better behaved with that tape over your mouth, Russian. Now let’s get those hands of yours tied up...” The man with the tape stepped forward ready to bind Val’s wrists together behind him, but he stumbled on his feet.

Suddenly, the ground shook around them. A red haired angel-looking person stood, glowing silver in a green dress with white boots on. She had brilliant green eyes, which flashed with anger. White angel wings with green tips protruded from her back.

It was Black Hawk...but it wasn’t Black Hawk! This was Zvezda, the Dallas Stars’ heroine. Or more precisely Valeri Nichushkin’s heroine. She was Evelyn O’Reilly, alright, but not ‘AKA: Black Hawk’, she was ‘AKA: Zvezda’!

“By the power of the stars and the universe, I command you to let him go now or I’ll make you!”

They ignored her and continued tormenting Val, who fought to get free. Val had managed to get the tape off of his mouth and he was panicking, “ZVEZDA!!”

Evelyn raced forward toward them. She sent little star-shaped discs out at the Wild players. They hit them, bursting into a dozen sparks, almost like a supernova exploding. Then she spun around on her heels and plucked the nearest Wild player and flung him into the air and sent him flying across the lot. The other two dragged Val toward a car and shoved him into the trunk. “Звезда, помогите мне! помогите мне!! AHHHH!!!! (Star, help me! Help me!)” They slammed the lid shut, trapping him inside the trunk.

Before either of them could hop into their seats and get away with their idea, Evelyn caught them both. She drew up a Black Hole with a simple hand gesture and flung them into it. They vanished instantly. She flicked her hand quickly to get rid of the Black Hole and then walked over to the car. She opened the trunk up and Val climbed out. He gripped onto her.

“You okay, Nichy?”

“Yeah. Stupid Wild players...they gang up on me and attack. I try to defend, but they strong and they want to hurt.”

“Looks like you could have some more English lessons there from Brooke.”

Val wraps his arms around her. “I’m so happy you my heroine! I always wanted you, but you no want me, now you do and you save me!”

“Yes, though I’m still trying to get a grasp on these new powers. Hawkley injected me with this different liquid stuff. Obviously I’m still new to the whole “Zvezda” thing.”

“You make good Zvezda! Мощность звездами. (Power of the Stars)”

“Yeah, the Power of the Stars, which includes Black Hole Creation, Stardust Manipulation, Star Generation, Asterokinesis, understanding and speaking Russian and saving you and the Dallas Stars, as well as a ton else I’m sure. My powers are more elaborate than Black Hawk I tell you!”

“Yeah!”

“Weird powers...but I’m sure I’m capable of much more...it will come with learning and practice. But please, like I once told Jonathan Toews, stay out of trouble, okay? Пожалуйста, держаться подальше от неприятностей, ладно? (Please, stay out of trouble, okay?)”

“Ладно! (Okay!)”

“English! Even though I understand you.”

“Okay.”

Evelyn gave him a quick kiss and then twinkled like a star. She blew him another kiss in farewell, before fading away. He grinned and darted back into the AAC. He darted down the hall and into the locker room. He skidded to a halt, staring at Jamie Benn, his captain, who was shocked at his sudden arrival.

“What’s up, Val?”

“Dallas has heroine!!”

“Dallas has a heroine? Are you okay, Val?”

“Zvezda!! Zvezda saved me!”

“Zvezda? As in Star? I know you taught us all Star in Russian.”

“Da, Zvezda!” He started to go off on a fast Russian rant.

Jamie patted him. “Come and get your things, so we can get to the plane. We have to be in San Jose for the game tomorrow!”

The two of them finished getting their things together and then walked off out into the brisk Dallas air. Val looked up to the sky, spotting all the stars out. They twinkled, as if winking at him. He smiled and when he looked back down, Evelyn stood on the bottom step of the plane. She walked forward and grabbed Val’s head in her hands and kissed him again.

Right in front of Jamie, who was shocked.

“Hawkley doesn’t have to know about this, but yeah, I’m real, Jamie Benn and if ever any Star (reluctantly including Tyler Seguin) needs help, I am here to help. I am the Dallas Stars savior, Zvezda or Star.”

She twinkled and faded away again, laughing. “Good luck in your games! Beat the Sharks!”

Jamie turned to Val, who was beaming largely. He shook his head and walked up the steps and into the plane. “Come on, Val!”

Val blinked and then zoomed up after him.

And she stayed true to her word, she would often save Valeri Nichushkin by day and then watch him play hockey by night! And she went to every game. Sure, many didn’t recognize her, but she was there...as Evelyn O’Reilly.

Notes

ZVEZDA!!!! XDDDD
Thanks to A Shruinger for helping me out with the name!
POWER OF THE STARS!! :)
Okay, there may be a sequel with this, but it won't be started for a while!! So...
I got nothing else to say here, except...

THE END!!

Thanks for reading! ;)

Comments

@EvelynaKitty
1-3. Awesome! :D
4. Okay, cool! :)
5. Okay, I'll message you the limitations for Black Hole Creation ;)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/16/15

@A Shruinger
1. :D
2. Okay, I'll look at that. ;)
3. XD
4. Okay. True, you are right. I'll put twinkling in then instead of flickering. :)
5. Understandable and yeah, I'll message you further with it when you reply next. And you can also list the limitations in the message too for me. The ones you find out from the page that is. :)

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
2/15/15

@EvelynaKitty
1. You're welcome! ;)
2. Um, the one like when Z says something like, "Stay out of trouble, Val," in Russian and all the Russian below that ;)
3. Hahaha! I also have a Russian keyboard ;) Cool! :)
4. Oh...that's more like 'twinkling,' not 'flickering.' Flickering is more like, suddenly, slashy, movements, making things disappear and reappear quickly, like a flame or a glitch. Twinkling is like sparkling, the brightness softly growing bright then dimming down. I think you mean 'twinkling' since stars twinkle, not flicker.
5. Yea, great power does come with great exhaustion when used! XD But it's not fun when two superhumans have the same limitations. :P Instead, maybe like let her struggle making the black hole, like let her have a hard time creating it and controlling it (with this, you'll have to redo the last chapter :P ) Or maybe there's this one limitation I read where when a user uses her power, then she can't use like her power for like a certain amount of time; applied to this: if Z uses her Black Hole Creation, then she can't use her powers for like, let's say, a week. I dunno. Those are some limitations there. But I can also go back to the profile of the Black Hole Creation to see the limitations on there. And she's gotta watch out with that hold too because she just might suck in some people/objects that aren't suppose to go in there X) But yea, you can email or message me about this if you'd like to :) I can't tell you, I'll spoil it for ya! ;) And that's right, I gotta get on typing up the update! I shall do that like right now ;)
You're totally welcome! :)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/15/15

@A Shruinger
1. Hmmmm....okay, I remember double checking it and putting the right one in. But maybe not...I don't know, if it's wrong I'll change it. Thanks.
2. Weird...I normally do. What are the phrases that need translations??
3. I'll fix that via my handy-dandy Russian keyboard. :)
4. Yeah, like a star flickers in the night sky, that's one I am picturing, which should just be flickered. :)
5. Okay, yeah, what do you suggest with the limits for her then. And I don't want to go into too much detail here with it...it can happen in the sequel but that is a helpful thing to know. I mean Jonny can get so mad he exhausts himself and almost kills himself, so Zvezda should have something like that, that is true. But I'm not sure what limits to the Black Hole or her Power of the Stars can be. (We chat about this through email or the message system though.) It's not Tavy or Jonny though, right? It's NEMO!!!! Or Kari!!
Thanks! XD

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
2/15/15

Okay, I read and this is what I got:
1. For the subtitle for this chapter, I translated and the first part was translated to 'Star of my charcter...,' so I decided to help ya out and for 'Star is my hero,' I got 'Звезда мой герой.' ;)
2. Can you put in translations, please? 8)
3. 'ладно' needs to be capitalized: 'Ладно.'
4. 'Flickered away.' Can you describe this more beacuse I picture her just glitching into nothingless, unless that's what you're aiming for :P
5. Alright, so I think Z's unstoppable because she can make black holes easily. And no one would be able to stand up to her with that great of power (unless they have something that has to do with taking away powers or nullifying powers or having omnipotence, then it's fine). Maybe with her creating such a powerful thing, she should have like a cost to it or a struggle making it so that it can be difficult and the villains can have somewhat of an edge. Maybe put a limitation. Because if a character has very powerful powers, then it'll be easy for them and the plot wouldn't be that strong, including the climax and it's expected for that character to win easily due to the strong powers. So I highly recommand putting limitations on her-- Don't worry, I have a character coming up in Mission very soon that is going to have GREAT power, but he's gonna have many limitations so that he can be somewhat vulnerable and make things less easy for him ;) Either place limitations or have a villain that is very powerful (but not too powerful, of course)! Just a tip for creating a better superhero story ;)
Other than that, all good! :)

A Shruinger A Shruinger
2/15/15