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Marcus

James awoke with hands around his neck. Jonathan was straddling him, trying to strangle him. Jonathan's eyes were surprisingly cold, and his face was twisted in fury.

"I know it was you, you fucker!" He began, screaming," Why did you kill Q! You kill everything! Now you deserve to die!" Jonathan began pushing harder into James' neck.

James could see Patrick in the distance, watching and crying. James' face began to turn purple, until he did something that shocked all of them. As Jonathan's face got close, James kissed him, causing Jonathan to stop for a second. In that second James kicked him hard in the scrotum. Jonathan let out a scream, and fell of the bed. Patrick started to run to Jonathan when James stepped in the way. His eyes were red from where the blood vessels had burst, and his neck was purple from where Jonathan's hands had been. James' nose was also bleeding, and he was coughing up blood. Patrick stared at him for a time until James walked close to him, and punched Patrick in the nose, knocking him to the floor.

"That's for only watching," He said explaining, blood still flowing out of his nose.

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James turned and walked over to Jonathan, whose balls had swollen to the size of apples James straddled Jonathan, and saw that Jonathan was crying, and that blood was dripping out of his mouth. James punched him three more times in the mouth, and stood back up. Patrick watched him from the floor, shaking in fright.

James sat down next to Patrick and began to stroke his hair. Patrick didn't know what to take from this, as James had killed Q, nearly killed Jonny, and had punched him too. These thoughts we're stopped when James began to kiss Patrick, pulling Patrick into a tight embrace. Patrick didn't know what to do, he was in a relationship with Jonny, and James was a phsyco, but he just felt so right. After a time, James broke the kiss off, and kissed Patrick on the nose. James stood up and told Patrick to get Jonathan cleaned up. Then James dressed and left.

Patrick crawled over to where Jonny was. He was soaked in bloody urine, as he had peed himself, and his face was swollen and bloody.

"Peeks?" Jonny barely choked out.

"I'm here baby," Patrick replied, pulling Jonny into a hug.

"I'm scared," Jonny replied shaking.

"You're safe with me here," Patrick replied, kissing him on the top of the head.

"I love you Peeks," Jonny replied, almost like a child. Patrick didn't respond, as he didn't know if he could say the same thing, after what had just happened. Instead he helped Jonathan up, and helped him walk gingerly over to the shower. They kissed underneath the warm water. Jonny was quite satisfied, but Patrick wasn't.


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James sat in the car. He had taken off after the incident this morning, and had driven to a pretty sketchy part of town. He picked up his burner and dialed a number, when the person on the other line picked up, his heart skipped with joy.

"Hey J," Logan's voice came through the speaker.

"Hey L" James replied.

"How's it going?" Logan asked.

"Fine, and you?"

"I'm doing better, Laura and I plan on leaving sometime this week," He answered.

"Good luck," James told Logan.

"You too! Be careful baby, I love you," Logan said.

For some reason James could not say I love you back. He just couldn't find a way to do it," I will," James said and hung up.

James turned his attention back to the house. It was a crappy-red-brick house that looked like most of places here. James knew that these neighborhoods were places he liked to stay as they attracted little attention.

James got out of the car, wearing a suit minus the tie.He wakes towards the house, when a muscular African-Ameriacn man walked towards him, indicating for him to stop. James walked until he was about a foot away from him, when James took his hand and hit the man in the nose, so that it went back into his skull, killing the man. Another guard on the porch ran towards him, James took him out with a punch to the throat, and killed the other guard by snapping his neck. James walked into the building, and into an office area. Sitting at the desk with his hand indicating for James to sit was Marcus Dobson.

James sat down, and Marcus offered him some Scoth, which James refused They sat in silence for a time, studying each other, until James started the conversation.

"Your new guards suck," He said, in a dry tone. For another period they stared at each other, until simultaneously they began to laugh together.

"Nothing has been the same since you left," Marcus said while chocking down laughs.

"You know why I left," James told Marcus.

"Laura had the information about Logan. So you lied to her about me, and left," He responded.

"Yep, to protect you, and the company," James said.

"I thank you for ensuring this company's success," Marcus replied with a smile.

"I killed Joel Quenneville like you asked me to," James informed him.

"Good, he was quite dangerous," Marcus said, while grabbing two wads of hundreds and handing them to James, who smiled and pocketed them.

"You were right. Our plan is working. The other four have no idea we are using them. When Laura falls into the trap, we can end her and Jonathan Toews. He's not needed, but I think I'll keep Patrick. He can be of some use."

"Alright. I knew that you and I together could never be beaten," Marcus smiled and cackled. He and James shook hands, and James walked out of the house and got into his car.

"Nobody's Fool" began playing, and James hoped that that was true about him.



Notes

Next Up: One of the two Blackhawks die.

Comments

@J10954
You're very welcome, anytime I can help out. I know...but I'm going to be sad nonetheless...Good work so far though and I will read and like it! :)

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
12/12/14

@EvelynaKitty
Thank you for your advice. Not every character in a story can survive, even if it is Jonathan Toews, or Patrick Kane.

J10954 J10954
12/12/14

Poor Kazer....
Three things: One, I love the action in this, Two: I feel like each part should be extended some more, and Three: I'm confused at how they got from the bedroom to the shower so fast. Can this be paced a little longer and slower? I know that this type of writing is highly exciting, but this is where it takes great patience. Sometimes I still have this problem, but pacing is best helped through description, however boring it may be. Hope this helps out! I still love this idea, even though....you're gonna....kill....Jonny or Kanerboo....
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't kill either of them!! :O Why does Kanerboo or Jonny have ta die???? No. No. I'm gonna be sooooooo sad. :(

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
12/12/14

@J10954
You are totally welcome! Keep up the amazing work! :DDD Just loved it--perfect! :)))

A Shruinger A Shruinger
12/7/14

Yes, I love the description added. Let me know if you need any help and feel free to just use my stories for examples of description help if ever you're in question, but I think it is great! :D Good work!

EvelynaKitty EvelynaKitty
12/7/14