The Moonstone Starlet - Comments, page 2

@Morg71
I'll post a new chapter later today, just waiting for my french translator to get back to me.

This is one of the best stories I've ever read. Pleeease update soon!!

This is my obsession. I need more! Where are you??

I am happy that Elia is finding so freedom for herself but I wish it didn't seem like she was cutting out a huge part of her life

I really love her relationship with Pat. Hate that jon is doing this to her

Noo! Jon stop being stupid, she loves you!

Oh geez. He's messing up big time! I hope he gets his act together in your next update :)

WTF Jon! YOU JUST GOT THE GIRL AND NOW THIS! ughhhh soo good but like ugh lol
Great writing!!!

ugh really jon

You hate us! I'm convinced haha Why else would yu leave a chapter like thiiiiiis?! We need answers, Jonny!

Ugh when will people learn it's better to just aaaaaassssskkkk :)

OMG - this just keeps getting better!!!! Can't wait to see who she punched out lol!

Kind of getting arrested? Oh no...what did she do now???

my goodness she has some spirit

Haha kind of getting arrested?

This story is absolutely amazing! I've literally spent all day reading it. I can't wait for the next update :)

I love when Pat's right

Amen, listen to Pat jonny boy

Why do you do these things to us?! This is only get worse before it gets better...

I'm so happy they're finally happy together!!!!!!