The Moonstone Starlet - Comments, page 4

Dont do it Elia . Love the bit about TBI and everything I actually want to work with people with brain injuries

Jon needs to step up his game already! I can't take much more lol!

im just waiting for jon to make his move.... lol ur killing me jk jk Love it! great work! :)

Great chapters. Love her sitting in the 300's with all those fans. Also about her and Carcillo going to do a mike night

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Cool! Thanks!

I just started reading and I already love it! Keep it up, I love Elia's independent attitude.

Can't wait for the next update

great job

Another great chapter!!. I wouldn't expect anything else from Marchand. I hope she let's him have it in the next chapter!! Can't wait for the next update

What a dick move, have sex with her and leave her. Yeah it seems like she may not really truly deeply have the love for you that you had for her. That doesn't justify cheating and neither does the fact that she seems not to be able to emotional share her life with him but he is not making it easy for her either. What the hell

I feel horrible for her. She better let him have it

Oh my god I feel so bad for Elia. Another great chapter and I can't wait for the next update.

Oh shit is getting real now - Go get him Elia!!! Update soon!!

Shit is about to hit the fan. well it is in progress. Hope Patty is okay, that Elia can handle her dad getting paroled, and that the bruins get a swift kick to the balls.

Great job, but she is not at the game because Brad's asshole is showing

love it

Nicely done. Missing some Toews & Kaner in her life

Great job. I bet if and when shit goes down with Pat. Brad isn't supportive of her leaving to help them and she does anyway, then they break up. Thats my tidbit of guessing with foreshadowing

Get Elia and Jon together already :) Please!!! Loved the chapter.

Yippee for doing something awesome ; ) Love the new chapter//