Project Blackhawk (or The Blackhawk Experiment) - Comments

@EvelynaKitty
It's okay, it took time for me too :P That's how I pictured Sid like when I was in 8th grade (except less violent than your view of Sid), but now I picture him as a 4 year old stuck in a 27 year old's body! XDDDD

@A Shruinger
Yeah, yeah, my bad, I'm still getting the grasp of that. XP And yeah, but I think in my stories Evil Sid is the alter ego of Sid. But I love Evil Sid, cause he's a great villain, like Pronger and Rinaldo and Avery. ;)

@EvelynaKitty
It's bad-good, not good-evil character-- John is a bad-good character! Yes! John is exactly as sly as a fox! Perfect simile for him! :D And Evil Sid and Sid are two complete different people!

@A Shruinger
I feel like we both think of him like a good-evil. It's how I see Sid too. But with Sid its more Sid and then Evil Sid almost like an alter-ego thing, with Tavy though I think he's more sly...like a fox! Tavy's a fox!! :)

@EvelynaKitty
Okay, good! :)
Yes, it's better for John to save them! :D Geez, is it me or does John seem like the type of guy who would work behind the bad guys' back, tricking them, like in Mission how no one knew Tazer was staying with John?

@A Shruinger
You'll soon see about that answer. ;) I promise. It's coming. For now it appears that Jamie doesn't mind.
I knew you'd be happy about it. Honestly I was gonna have Shawzy just break down the door and go all badass on Pronger's people, but then I thought, hm....let's not do that, so I was trying to think of how they could escape, so I thought about bring Tavy back to life and then I got the idea and so yes, Tavy's alive! :)

YAY JOHN'S ALIVE! :DDDDDDDDDD JOOOOOOOOOOHNNNNNN!!!! :DDDDDDDD Oh, John, you scared me there for a moment! XD
But I'm glad that you didn't kill off John because I wasn't expecting him to die nor come back to life!
So Jamie's fine with John being Tyler's friend?
BUT JOHN'S ALIVE!!! :DDDD I got so happy! :DDDD

@EvelynaKitty
Okay, good to know! :)))

@A Shruinger
Yeah, Project Blackhawk is super different. XP
Sorry, uh...yeah, he had to die though, but I thought it would be funny to have Tavy be friends with Tyler. And everything's gonna make sense after Friday. I'm literally making this all up now off the top of my head. You never know who will come in. I think it's a smart concept with this, because it is time travel and Pronger's screwed it up so much. XD
And I'm getting to Jamie Benn...wait for it.

I do agree with you, Project Almanac and Project Blackhawk are running on different tracks now (except for the title)!
OMG, when I read that John died I was like, "NOOOOO!!! I CAN'T TAKE THIS ANYMORE!!!" and skated around my house in haste, thinking of the horrible image I was left behind with after reading the part where John was shown dead. But then I came to the conclusion that John's character in the story that had those fight scenes I sent to you almost a week ago also ends up dying, so all is well :)
But if Tyler is John's friend, then would Benn be jealous? Unless if this is in an alternative timeline, then that'll be a different story... But yea, just wondering. I can't picture John and Tyler being friends though...
But you totally shocked me when you killed of John! 8O I was NOT expecting that! Great job on the thrill there! ;)

@EvelynaKitty
Alright, can't wait to hear that! ;) Yea, I was surprised that it was Adam working for Pronger! 8O I can see that it's getting more intense, which is what I like! :D Good, good, that sounds like good stuff! :))) Great job! :DDD

@A Shruinger
I know....I'm so sorry, But yeah the backstory to this plot is going to get complex. And how about Burish?? :P Totally unexpected right? I literally made that up as I wrote this chapter....but it's creepy and awesome right? I told it would be intense and yay!! It's gonna get even more intense... :)))) I'm super excited that you like it though!!!! I'm working on unpredictability as well as the fight scenes, descriptions/pacing and making the men characters more manly too XPPPP I got suspense down pact though! ;)

Oh no, poor John!!!! 8OOO John seemed so weak...poor John... :PPP YOU'LL DO FINE, JOHN!!! 8((((
But this is getting very intense at the moment! :D Very, very good! :DDD But I like how you let John be the dude has the time machine--like the smart guy who can make practically everything like John from AAOOOSC! XD But the story's getting pretty good do far! ;)

@A Shruinger
That's right. It's mainly cause he's a Baby Russian though, so naturally he's lost and clueless, so I help him out!! XD

@EvelynaKitty
Of course she would...because Val for some reason can't save himself and needs a girl to help him out...
Sorry, just thinking out loud there. :P

@A Shruinger
Poor Valeri...if he was being used, Zvezda would come and save him!! :D

@EvelynaKitty
Okay good :) That'd be a trip though if Val is a villain in your story...or like working for a villain XD

@A Shruinger
No, no, you didn't actually make me cry...I know you were kidding. Haha. It's all good. But I'd never make Val evil, I just can't envision him terrorizing anyone. :)

@EvelynaKitty
I was just messin' around with you! Oh no, did I actually make you cry? I FEEL SO BAD!!! 8OOO Sorry if that actually hurted you! 8( But I mean, you can call John and Nemo evil if you want to just to get back at me ;)
Yay! :DDD

@A Shruinger
Then why did you guess that it was him???? I'd NEVER make Val evil. No, no, no, no. He's super innocent! He can never be a villain. He's just a baby. :( Why am I crying right now over this???? :P
I have made the changes! :)