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@A Shruinger
I'll let you no this, IT'S NOT VALERI!!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!! Sweet Baby Russian would NEVER do that!! But you'll see...
I'll go back and fix the mistakes cool! :) Tuesday is the next one!! :D
Ooo! Ooo! It's Kari! Kari did it! IT'S KARI!!! If not, maybe Jimmy? Or Perry, Corey Perry! Maybe Chad Johnson. Or Bob? 8( No, Val! X))) MOO-HA-HA! Maybe it was Pekka...or Nemo himself! 8O Or Pavelski? Oh no! Or Raanta? Yea, it's Raanta's fault ;) Did I guess right? 8)
I found a few mistakes though:
1. "Look what I found, Saader?" Andrew said. This is not a question...
2. There were many times where there was a list of dialouges and I had no I idea who was saying what. So maybe it'll be nice to reread this chapter to type in who was saying what ;)
Other than that, I can't wait for the next update! :D
@EvelynaKitty
XDDDD
YAY!!! :DD Can't wait to see how he'll be like in here! ;))) I can't picture him in red though XP He looks good in not-so-bright colours :) I hope Nemo's in here, though! But it's okay if you don't plan to have him in here--I understand :)
Not with Landeskog, just in a Avs uniform ;) But Tazer belongs in the Blackhawks :)))
@A Shruinger
Oh, I know...the Blackhawks would be the epitome of my hatred, but luckily they aren't!! :)
Yes. Tavy will speak and be apart of the thing. Unfortunately...I don't know how much of a part he will have. But he will be in it more. ;) Nemo might...it depends...you'll know when both of them pop up. :)
Heehee...I can't see Jonny with Landy as an Av...no, no, no.
Ohmygoodness, I couldn't believe you put Therrien and Kessel on the same team! XDD Blackhawks would be a total nightmare for you if that was actually true! XDD
OMG, when I saw that you mentioned John in here, I was like, "OMG OMG OMG YAYAYAAAAY!!!" :DDD Is he ever gonna talk or be in a scene at least? 8) Oh, and is Nemo also gonna be in here?
But it's awesome so far! :D And geez, Tazer seems mean as an Av! XP I can actually picture him in a Avs jersey, actaully...looks good in that colour ;)
@EvelynaKitty
Hahaha! XDDD Well, he IS blond! XDDD I knew you'd freak out to that! XDD
Good, good! Alright, sweet! :)))
2/15/15