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Wake Me Up

Chapter 8

Ten minutes later after Jackie's run in with Jonathan, she was sitting uncomfortably in the trunk of Hannah's car. Hannah had told her that if she went out first, to hide in the trunk so Jonathan wouldn't see her when he walked her out.

So instead of disagreeing, Jackie slipped into the back and was now currently sitting on top of food wrappers.

Hannah's car is a mess, Jackie thought as she tried to find a comfortable way to sit. The car had left over bags from Taco Bell and had crumbs, scattering the floor. And that was just the trunk. Which, by the way, Jackie had no idea how they had gotten there. As she sat there, with her foot up her ass, she went through her encounter with Jonathan. He had definitely checked her out. Or did he? Maybe it was just Jackie's mind, playing tricks on her. Either way, he was off limits and Jackie had to except that.

"That dinner was amazing!" Jackie heard a high pitched voice gush. Hannah.
"Yeah, I love the food there," Jonathan said as he walked Hannah to the car. Jackie stole herself a peak at where they were standing. Hannah was by the driver's seat while Jonathan had his hands on her thin waist.

"I had fun tonight," Jonathan said, grinning shyly. Jackie's heart melted when he smiled.
"I did too, we need to do this again sometime," Hannah said, her voice seductive. Jackie rolled her eyes. It was disgusting seeing your bestfriend flirt. Well maybe she was the only one who thought that. . .

"I really don't wanna leave you so soon," Jonathan said. Of course he didn't want to leave her.

"Well you don't have to leave me so soon if you drive me home," Hannah cooed. Jackie let out a gasp. Was Hannah really gonna leave her here and make her drive Hannah's dumb ass car back?
"What about the car?" Jonathan asked, a look of concern spreading across his face.
"I can call a friend of mine to come get it, she'll just have her mom drive her here and then she can drive the car back or whatever," Hannah said, acting like it all made sense and wouldn't be an inconvenience.
"Are you sure?"
"Postive," Hannah replied. Without another word, Jonathan, with his arm slung lazily around Hannah's shoulders, walked Hannah to his Ferrari.

Jackie couldn't believe this. After all he had done for her this was how she got repaid? Most people wouldn't make a big deal out of this. But Jackie did for a lot of reasons and one of them mainly because she had to sit in the trunk for ten minutes with her foot up her ass.

When Jonathan and Hannah had driven away, Jackie climbed out of the back and into the driver's seat. She started up the car and turned on the radio. The song Chelsea Dagger played.
"For one minute can the world not throw things at me that remind me of Jonathan?" Jackie mumbled as she pulled out of the parking lot.


"I can not believe you!" Hannah exclaimed as she stomped into Jackie's house. Jackie had beaten her home and was on the couch scrolling through tumblr.
"You know I have a door that you can use," Jackie said. Hannah didnt listen.
"The whole car ride back, all Jonathan did was talk about his run in with some girl that didnt have the slightest interest in him!" Jackie looked up from tumblr, surprised.
"Really?"
"Yes really!" Hannah shouted. Jackie put down her phone and glared at Hannah.
"How do you know the girl was me?" Hannah threw up her hands in frustration.
"Oh come on Jackie! Your like, the only girl I know who doesn't like Jonathan Toews." Wrong.
"Um well you got me, but who gives a shit? Cause if he does that just goes to show how self absorbed he is into thinking everyone likes him," Jackie fired back. Hannah didn't listen.
"I wanted to hook up with him in his car and I didn't even have the chance to make my move cause he was to obsessed over this girl that didn't give him the time of day!" Even though Jackie was supposed to be saying her sorry, she couldn't help but feel a twinge of excitement that she had made an imprint on him.
"I'm sorry," Jackie finally announced. Hannah huffed as she say down.
"Whatever, it's to late for that."

Now usually If this was any other person, Jackie would've told them to shut the fuck up and that they were lucky she was even helping them out. Jackie wasn't afraid to speak her mind. But when it came to Hannah? She had a soft spot. She didn't like hurting her feelings and didn't like making her feel worthless. Maybe that was why Hannah was so confident.

Suddenly, Jackie remembered a memory from when Hannah and her were only five years old.
"We are going to play Barbies!" Little Hannah declared, as she began to set up the dream house. It was a Friday morning and the weatherman had predicated rain all day. Jackie nodded along. Personally she didn't want to play Barbies. She wanted to play knee hockey instead. But she didn't want to disappoint her best friend! when the house was all set up, Hannah got out her collection of dolls. She chose the prettiest one, with blond hair and the coolest of clothes.
"Her name is Ally and she owns the dream house! She's the coolest one!"
"Who can I be?" Little Jackie asked. Hannah picked up a doll with messy hair and no clothes on. The doll also had marker drawings on her body.
"Her, she's not cool." Jackie did a frown.
"Can't I be someone like yours?"Hannah shook her tiny head fast.
"Oh no! Then the storyline would be all messed up and we wouldn't want that!" Usually at school, she made the other kids be the cruddy dolls and when someone tried to talk back to her or say something about Jackie would reply back, "I got her first and even if I didn't I still called her!" But with Hannah, she didn't want to disappoint her. So she just shut up and was the ugly doll.

Jackie shoot the memory from her head, as they sat there, listening to the sounds of the TV Hannah spoke.
"The good news is, he gave me bench seats at tomorrow nights BlackEagles game against the swirly team!" Hannah smacked her forehead.
"it's the Blackhawks and it's the Carolina Hurricanes you dumbass." Hannah shrugged.
"Who cares?" All that matters is that Im going to the game!" Jackie tools a deep breath, to try and calm herself from beating the shit out of Hannah.
"lucky you. I'm going to bed, I had a rough night and besides my nose hurts." Jackie said, touching her nose lightly. Danica had definitely broken it when she punched her.
"Your nose hurts? Why?" Hannah asked, confused.
"I already told you why."
"Really? I must not have been listening." Jackie rolled her eyes. What else was new? As Jackie began making the long trek up the stairs, Hannah called her bak down.
"Oh my Gawd! I totally forgot! He gave me two tickets to the game tomorrow! So guess who's coming with me?" Hannah exclaimed, smiling. In a matter of seconds, Jackie was down the stairs and looking at Hannah as if she was seeing her for the first time.
"No way!"
"You think I would make this shit up? YES WAY!" Jackie screamed her head off.
"THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!" Jackie had never been to a Blackhawks game. It had always been her dream to go to a game though.
Looks like dreams do come true.
Well most of them anyway.

Notes

Next chapter I'm promising will be a good one! Since it'll be when they are at the game. Hopefully Jackie will fall for someone like Patrick Kane...or not XD

Comments

she died ... no
Im not going to lie I was hapeing for a twist in the story and Pat would be the one to save her lol but great story anyways put more soon
Lidija Lidija
9/1/13
aww.. So happy her and her team whipped it out in the championship and that someone was there to stop the a holes at the bar
really great. Loved that she checked Pat. I honestly would love a story where they didn't necessarily play him off as an ass once he gets in a relationship. Everyone makes bad decisions where he is in his life his is just more publicized. Of course I have never met him or would actually know him more than face value so he always could be an A hole.. who knows...

Anyway great story keep it up
Please post soon :) I'm having withdrawal symptoms from not reading your stuff.
Stacey93w Stacey93w
8/22/13