AAOOOSC!: The Mission - Comments, page 3

Yeah, it's your fault XP I'm kidding, it's my father's, he didn't watch, so I didn't get to actually
Well, Marchy kept picking on Kaner throughout the game. It was funny, until Marchy slashed at Kaner and then aimed to hit him up high in the head.
Well, I'm closer to Tampa, then where the Panthers are. Panthers are just north of Miami, but Tampa is the closest and I don't like the Panthers either. But I'll send them telepathic support and maybe even force Jonny to give Kaner a good luck kiss. XP I'll have to really focus though. Haha.
I'm going to, but I'll check him out tomorrow, okay?

@EvelynaKitty
So I'm the reason why the Blackhawks lost? XDDD It's fine! What's Brad doing with Kaner though? The Blackhawks are coming over to Florida? Are you gonna watch 'em! :D
Did you look up Beau? 8)

SO IT WAS YOU!!!! :P You killed the poor Hawks....but at least the series got tied...but poor babies or babes. :P Also, Marchy needs to leave Kaner alone, geez I feel like Jonny right now!! XP I know. I feel bad for Crow...he had a really bad day, but dang that's a three-game losing streak, but hey, they come to Florida...I gotta journey down to Sunrise XD

@EvelynaKitty
Awesome! :D
I actually watched only the second period, which was a good choice because that was when the Bruins began creaming the Blackhawks! XDD Best period ever! Awesome to see all those goals scoren! But poor Crow! He was so mad--he threw his helmet off after he was traded by Raanta 8( But still, great game! :)

I will! XD
The second one is Hawks-Bruins, how can you NOT watch that one? XP

@EvelynaKitty
Yes, yes! :D Yay, tell me whatcha think about him! ;)
I might watch the second one since I like watching hockey in the morning and I can't watch two games in a row :P

Oh, okay...OH!! Beau Bennett, right?? That the guy? Yeah, I'll check him out! XP
Oh, cool. I'm doing the second one!! :) Let's go Kazer!! XD

@EvelynaKitty
Hahahaaa! XD That'll be terrible! But no, you'll see how things turn out ike with him as th lead ;)
Beau is not a Hab!!!! He's a Pen! But you should check him out--he's so funny and weird! XD
I dunno...
Yup! Two games today I can watch! :D And I'm watching one right now! :)))

Oh, yeah, Patrick's gonna make a sucky Master though, since he'll get captured most of the time XP No, no I'm sure he'll stay out of trouble.
I don't know who Beau is?? Is he a Hab? He sounds like a Hab?
Haha, isn't Pronger tall too? And Tyler Myers!! And Zenon freaks Tyler out, so...
OOOH!!!! That's awesome!! Yay! Hockey Day!! :P

@EvelynaKitty
Yea, well, he's Master! We're gonna see how that goes later on in the story! ;) But no, I didn't kill of Nemo, I just needed to bring suspense and the GHP into the depths of their problems to make things for challenging! But don't worry, happy ending! :) Hahahaa! XD But if you hadn't looked into Beau aka Sunshine, then you should 'cause he is just weird, but funny! :) Ooo, yea, that'll be scary too! But John Scott's 6 foot 8 and Zdeno's 6 foot 9, so yea...they're tall and scare! 8OOOOO
Yes, yes! :)))
Oh, and I comepletely forgot, but Happy Hockey Day In America! :D 35 years ago today is when the Amercians beat the Soviets in hockey! :D

Holy ****!!!! OH GOD, PATRICK CAN'T BE MASTER!!!! HE'S A TROUBLESOME SPY!!!! :O WHAT???? AND YOU "KILLED" OFF NEMO???? :OOOO WHAT???? Wow, I'm shocked... this is going to be interesting with Patrick Timothy Kane Jr. (of Valencia) as the Master. Haha, can I suggest also looking at Valeri Nichushkin or Nikita Zadorov images too???? XP
I would also add, Sean Avery and Zenon Konopka to that! :P And yes, be respectful on here please, people enjoy writing and negative comments have no place here. ;)

@EvelynaKitty
Thanks! :)))
Yea, Toews seems more like the stubborn one, like Dixon from Something, while Patrick can adjust to things more easily and is a bit more happy :) They don't call Toews 'Captain Serious' for nothing ;)
Yup! That's what we're all here for! :DDD So nice! 8)

Cool, I'll check it out real fast. :) It's much better though!! Good job!
haha, sort like in My Knight, though Patrick has second thought at the moment, but it's a slow progression to Kazer, you know. But Jonny's so stubborn!
You're welcome. I just kept noticing that you say that, and yeah. But you're welcome! That's why I'm here!! I love to help out!! :)
You're welcome again ;) XP Haha.

@EvelynaKitty
Alright, I put in the way of how Patrick escaped ;)
Yea, Patrick does care about Toews, but Toews doesn't care about Patrick, that's how it's like right now in here.
I fixed it! Thanks! :)
Okay, thanks for that update, like I didn't know. :P

Okay, so um, Nemo can get free because his hands flickered away? But how could he get Kanerboo free? Can you explain that some more? It seems really quick and simple, which I don't think is the case and also I'm unsure exactly how he got him free you know. But nice...a tiny bit of Kazer in here, cause Kaner's concerned for Jonny! XP nice!
One quick grammatical comment too, when you say "in hostage" it should just be "a hostage" or just "hostage" :) the "in" isn't nesessary ;)
Also, haha Lightning won!! XD

@A Shruinger
1. Whoever wins in the end...hopefully it's Kazer! XP
3. Kaner never gets it easy with us, does he? Haha! Silly little spy! XPP

@EvelynaKitty
1. Yea, I gotta agree with that! ;) Uh oh...I dunno...Tazer and Kane are on opposite sides...maybe root for each of them? But you'll see who wins in the end of the story :)
2. :D
3. Yup! ;) And talking about Kaner, next chapter is when Kaner's finally gonna come back! XDDD Man, poor dude, all that he had to go through! XD

@A Shruinger
1. Like I say, it's interesting...he's an interesting character and I don't know how I feel about him...I don't see him as an evil villain like Sid or Pronger, but I can see how he is a villain I guess. But I'm for Team Kazer, so where does that leave me?? XP
2. Okay. Good. :)
3. Oh...awe........ :( *sheds a tear for the thought that Jonny doesn't like Kaner* But at least I have something to look forward to in the end, I guess...right?

@EvelynaKitty
That's fine, I totally understand! At least you read it! XDDD
Hahaha! Thanks! :))))
1. John's the bad-good character here--he's suppose to appear bad. If you're going for the GHP, he's a bad guy. If you're going for the EHP, he's a bad guy. If you're going for Toews and/or him, then...he's a good guy. It just depends on which side you're on. But yea, I gotta say, John is somewhat the villain in this story due to the plans he has 8O Didn't see that comin', didcha? ;)
2. Oh whoops :PPP I fixed it already--replaced it with another word that makes more sense! :) Sorry :PP
3. Remember, at the moment, Tazer doesn't really like Kane because of his, Kane's, powers. So unfortunately, he doesn't really care about Kane, he just wants all this power situation stuff war, whatever you wanna call it, to be over and continue on with his life.
Thanks, I'll take that as a compliment ;) Yea, John...he's not what you thought. And he's still not what you think he is. Dun-dun-DUN!!!! 8OOOO

I totally meant to read this earlier today, but I got bombarded with stuff. But here's my "critique" I guess.
"He freezes for a moment, processing what the Blackhawk just said. “Oh…shoot, they’ll try to abduct you… Just—“ He looks over his should, facing Toews. “—just loiter here and don’t dislocate yourself. If someone approaches you, cry wolf.” - This made me laugh!! Awesome
Okay,
1. I'm confused...Is Tavy good or bad? He seemed kind of evil in this.
2. “I got too cocky, Tazer boy. But at least you’re cherished.” - I don't get the last part of this the "cherished" part? Cherished is like love, like I'm cherishing our friendship on here, Tazer cherishes having Kaner as his Partner-In-Crime!
3. Uh...I feel like Tazer should care WAY more about Kaner. At least keep bringing him up or something. I don't mean in a Kazer love kind of way, but in a friendship/teammate kind of way. XP
Interesting update...I'm not sure what to say about Tavy's character though...seems kinds like Sid to me... XP