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The Maze To Your Heart


I stared at a nervous Mavel standing in front of me, she was in a hurry to tell me something. I was confused, but still a little bit heart broken.

"Kristopher, we were almost forced into being friends as kids, I didn't want to be by you for a second, we despised each other. I grew up, you grew up, and we changed, and my love for you matured. And now that you're going, I don't want to miss a second with you. I've gone from hating you, to loving you, and mixed emotions..." Mavel ranted, all of her feelings, and I was stunned, but yet something inside of me made me love. "I have decided," She started saying, but then I joined in knowing what she was going to say.

"To stick with love, because hate is too great a burden to bear." We spoke in a soft tone, we were in-sync.

"You remembered," She smiled with amazement in her eyes.

"Of course, grade six in history class." I smiled back at her.

Our lips crashed into each others.

"Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep burning and unquenchable."

- Bruce Lee




I have re uploaded this and am continuing.


brm9 brm9
yeah sure, i don't mind doing those two. i just wanted it to be like a love triangle type thing. & i've started another chapter for this story, and im about to start the new story. :) should be out tonight. both of them. hopefully!
Ojiibikan Ojiibikan
Yeah, that is a lot. You could just start something new with this one! That would be good, I think :) Ummm..... Would Taylor Hall and Jordan Eberle be too cliche of my to say? Haha and for the girls name.... I like Evelyn!
HockeyGirl17 HockeyGirl17
i don't mind doing both but it will mean like less updating. can you give me two guys from the oilers? preferably around the same age, roughly. & a name for the girl, you won't believe how long it took me to pick mavels name.
Ojiibikan Ojiibikan
I know you probably don't want to do both, but I really liked this story! Hopefully you can get back to it eventually!
I think you should do it on the Oilers. There are so many fics on the Pens, and not many on the Oilers! :)
Can't wait to read it!
HockeyGirl17 HockeyGirl17